Love2act4ever

I thought a few of the rhymes were forced, but it had a very good flow and rhythm, but a few things should have been capitalized. I liked the theme, ...

Spelling and grammar are a big part of this. Make sure you double, triple, and quadruple check before you post something. I found a couple errors which I will take ...

Wow. This was really good. I loved the imagery and descriptive words. I loved the twist at the end, and how the whole piece flowed. It was very well written. ...

I agree with some of the other reviewers. Use spaces to make it seem more like a poem. Also, it was a bit confusing. I guess different people can interrupt ...

This sounds like a rap with a lot of unnecessary cussing. I am grateful for the warning and all, but not all rated R pieces have to have 10 curse ...

I really liked this. I felt the flow was very smooth. I also felt that the descriptive words you used, brought out the imagery through you words. It was very ...

Remember that you must write 2 reviews before you post your own work. Here is what I thought about your poem. I really liked it. It had a few forced ...

I really liked this one. I too, felt the rhymes where not too forced and that you used very descriptive words that could paint a picture in our minds, which ...

This poem was a little hard to follow, but I think I get it. It kind of reminds me of my poem "Life." lol. I really would have liked to ...

Wow. Danielle that was SO good. I only found one error... It was then the I realized, I was the one scared That the “the” to be changed to “that”. ...

All I have to say is rate it. PG13/R I really don't know which one. It was a very horrifying piece and makes you think. The fact is that there ...

To be honest, I didn't get the poem at all. The poem left me asking some questions like, is the dog a man or an animal? The reason I thought ...

I am VERY curious on to how this will be written as a musical. I LOVE musicals, and this was a little hard to follow. The main character looks like ...

Well, I will agree with you. SENIORS ROCK! CLASS 08 BABY! However the piece was ok. It was kind of, plain, little bit simple, and it didn't really have a ...

Like, that was, like, so, like, freaking spectacular, like. Wow...how do people talk that way? I really enjoyed your "One Act" I guess I could call it. It was very ...