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Okay; you use good emotive language in this poem. I think some imagery would improve it. Paint some pictures for us, tell us of the sights and smells, sounds and ...

eeeeeek >.< Maybe you should edit the spacing, it is very hard to read because there is no spaces between your paragraphs. This is probably why you haven't got any ...

I really liked this. The depth was refreshing in comparison with some of the work written these days. I love depth in writing, philosophy and thoughts, I adore them. There ...

I loved this chapter, Sarah. You have the perfect balance of imagery, emotive language and description. It's perfect. Your characters are well developed and interesting. Furthermore we found out more ...

Hey there Hassan, you were the random piece that was up the top of the page, so I come to review. xD We leave tomorrow morning!" I have a hatred ...

Hey there, welcome to YWS, even though you've been here for a pretty long time now. xD You are the random piece of writing that appeared at the top of ...

Hey there, Evan, I shall be your reviewer for today. You have no reviews? I'm here to change that! :D Okay, comments are at the end, just now, we'll get ...

I loved this poem. It was so philosophical and thought provoking, but at the same time it was an enjoyable read too. At first I thought it was about old ...

See, this is a really sad poem. I think it could be incredible if properly executed. You've got the bases of a good poem, but in some ways it lacks. ...

I loved this, Stella!! Sorry it took me so long to review :( I completely forgot :lol: I really liked this :D You had great description and imagery without it ...

Hey ;) I'm Kirsten and I'm going to review this for you. xD I would rather fly with the birds then spend my life wishing I had wings, I really ...

I really, really enjoyed this poem, Water. You rock at poetry ;) The idea of making spelling errors at the beginning is very creative and original, I love it :) ...

Hey there, welcome to YWS. xD I'm Kirsten and I'm going to be your reviewer for today. You're new so you won't know this, but here you have to keep ...

I really liked this poem :D It had a nice flow and rhyme. I was especially surprised at the rhyme, I usually hate rhyming poems but yours didn't seem too ...

WHAT ???? No one has commented? heheh sorry for the capitals, I get... carried away :lol: I love this poem. Really, explosive, it rocks ;) The only mistake I can ...