Lora

I really liked this very much! ...and everyone is right. it doesn't sound like a seven year old talking at all! so i agree with writingluver5, either change the age, ...

This was very good. i did feel like it was almost rushed, but i liked it anyways... just some typos here.... " He was stood behind me. " - should ...

*ha* yes... i really agree with Whence, except that i really did finish the 'poem.' i also agree with Claudette, Fand, and Snoik. please do not try and doesn't make ...

hmmm...i liked it very much. i just don't really like how the first stanza goes with the rest of the poem...maybe think about fixing it a bit. and Brad is ...

*sigh* it seems that everyone has said everything already. but that's ok, because...your poem had to much repition in why can't everything else? it's because it is a bit tiring ...

hmmmm....i can't relly get any emotion out of it. i don't think that the words really expressed it well enough for readers to understand. it is also a very broad ...

so...anyways...before all of this got just a bit off subject... i agree with Claudette and Whence. it was all very good, except that i to really didn't understand much of ...

Yeah, this was my first time reading anything of yours! it was really great, though i'm not the best poem writer, so don't take anything to seriously! i like the ...

wow...that was really great!...i don't actually know what to say to that really...i think i'm still speechless! but no, really. Kitty15, is once again flowed great together, and all that ...

Muy Bien! me encanta tu 'poem' (not sure how to say it in spanish!) Anyways i really liked how it flowed off the tongue while reading it. i also liked ...

...the idea of the poem was good. but like Whence said, it should be more fresh...i don't know, i liked how the world's problem came into this poem...but it didn't ...

Yeah, i agree, the rhythm was hard to get up on, but i liked the fact that you were trying to get the raw, shattered feeling in it. maybe you ...

it was ok...but hey, i'm no genius either when it comes to poetry. i don't know, it was just a bit confusing to me. it seems that it should actually ...

i liked it very well enough. i understand that it was and english assingment, but i wish you would re-write it so that it would be a bit more descriptive. ...

:D i know i read the first chapter i think in school, right? ( though your handwriting is awful!....but that's besides the point.) that means that i have missed chapter ...