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"France and America are kind of more mainstream"... *in the West. Their not more mainstream to the people in Nigeria or Ghana, who I'm sure were also disturbed by this ...

I understood this poem to be somewhat of an extension or explanation behind the meaning of the expression 'eat me'. About how it's used when the person might be a ...

I hear you indian... I originally intended to make it mimick the motion of snakes moving through a large field to get the image of what it actually is like ...

Thanks for the comments - properly edited.

Thanks guys. I'll try to edit but my it's difficult. I understand what you're all saying though, so I will do my best.

Just a question, what was the aim of this poem?

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Copyright of Nathan Caldwell ;) Doing the boss' work I see.

Thanks for all the feedback. I'm going to edit this, paying attention to making everything stand out. I'll modify the end I hope I'll make it really cool. And I'll ...

Absolutely love this. Only suggestion is to add some imagery. Setting helps define atmosphere. Otherwise, awesome. I *Like* it (Next to where it says Like on YWS, one of those ...

Thanks Jash, Silent. I was experimenting with something BenFranks had told me and I feel punctuation helps the poem by giving it more breaks, etc. I s'pose if I'm going ...

Thanks, Ktg17, always nice to get positive feedback. Thanks to everyone who *Likes* and likes the poem. Thanks Shiney, you hit it right on the bell with the prayer thing, ...

The Featured Works section displays the five most popular works over the past three days as judged by the number of 'Likes' each has received in those three days." So ...

*REMOVED FOR OFFENSE*

Interestingly enough the boy is an actual boy, in my view. But having read it a second time I see how he became an actual soldier, nonetheless it works. RedLeaf ...