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Hey this poem got awesome near the end but the very first line is overused, my friend: "Beauty is a Rose". Rather invert this or change it totally. Okay, with ...

Quick one, 'kay? I can't really review content so I'll just nit-pick: strength. The things I truly wish I had. At first I went ??? You should have a dash ...

Hey, PowerOutage. I'm happy to say this "Book of Power" was definitely no outage in the interesting department. :lol: Oh geeky humor :roll: Anyway, into the review! Problems: You have ...

Heya, here for a quickie based on content. :D Okay, I'm feeling there's some heartbreak involved here, you end with how you want to go home. I think you could ...

Hey Native :D Well done. GMTA (Great Minds Think Alike) It's called, Chess/Love Game :D

Nice. *LIKED* But may I suggest, just for certain crazy reasons, changing it from the mist hiding the land, to the mist hiding in the land. Otherwise, you didn't really ...

Heya, this was a very nice piece :D *Hits Like Button.* There were a few nit-picks: You said you see yourself to me . I think this should be "in ...

Heya! I'd just like to say this was a very nice poem, but not necessarily above average. It's not very personal, any person could take this and use it as ...

Hey, here to review! --- You shot God, really? This was kind of offensive, I'm sorry to say. But that won't slip into my review: --- Praise: Once again your ...

Hey man! I'm here to do review. Get ready, get set, grow! :lol: Okay, so Praise/Problems/Tips --- Praise: I cannot actually say much, because I'm not sure exactly what you ...

Hi! Hero here to review this :D --- Okay, I must admit... your title hooked me. I was hoping for a very beautiful comparison piece where I realize the truth, ...

Hey there, welcome to YWS! I'm TheNewHero and am here to review your work! Isn't that great? :D --- Praise: I liked this story mostly because of the story itself. ...

Heya! Hero here to review... Okay, there's not much for me to review and (a) I haven't read The Legion of Superheroes comics so... it'll pretty much be a content ...

*Liked* Hey Hero here to review! There's not much to work with since it's good but I'll try. Problems/Praise/Tips --- Problems: Firstly, there were a few lines to be improved: ...

Well... here I am. Okay, so Problems/Praise/Tips order, eh? Problems: Like Scarlett said, spelling, although that may have been intentional right? There was only one other nit-pickable instance... Hav