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Wow. Your title really hooked me and this was very well written. I think you might want to include the whole "Risk Takers" bit into the story. Otherwise I really ...

Hey! hero here for a review... So what I liked about this poem? The scenery. Not what you were aiming for? Doesn't matter. Tips? I'd use something better than skittering. ...

Hero, here to review! Okay, I ilked this but it was a bit shaky. Simple enough to improve... Today we'll go Problems/Tips/Praise :) --- Problems: We shall focus on... :arrow: ...

Hi, here for a quick-review. I agree with Karsten, maybe you could fix that. I won't nit-pick today because a proper read-through would fix it all. I understand how poetic ...

Hero, here to review! Let's see, I'll go Problems/Praise/Tips. ------ Problems: Your grammar shook. It shook the dishes in the kitchen, but nothing broke. In other words, there was no ...

Hero here to review... Okay, I haven't read your story before this Chapter, but that will help me give a more straight forward review. And thanks for all the Janitors ...

Deep. I Liked this. Though I do have a few complaints, praises and a tip... ---- Complaints: It Amaze Me How you actually looked straight into my eyes and lied ...

I see you're new so... Welcome, to the good life! Now, I'm going to review this poem today. Sit back and enjoy. Firstly, I think you should have done this ...

Well done! If only I could write this kind of Romantic Fiction. What I liked most about your story is it was Short and Sweet. So, on to the review: ...

Well done! This was really good. Just one question: :arrow: Who is this story going to focus on? Because if it's Anna, then what you did was fine. If it's ...

I tihnk this was really awesome, only nit-pick? This game is of waiting,and for you this I will do. There should be a comma. You could've said I'll. Well done, ...

Hero here! Now, to review. Note if you cannot handle blood, you shouldn't read this. "read alittle and review what you read, you don't have to do it all at ...

Hey , the NewHero here to review. Let's start at the end shall we? The dragons arrival seems to be tensionous right? I didn't feel that. Maybe make it a ...

TheNewHero, TheLastOlympian, TheLightningThief, here to review. Now I'm not a poet, but... First thing I thought of was Katherine Patterson's ending to Jap. Running in the twilight and all. Very ...

Hero to review... I'm reviewing for you! Okay here we go: That was a great poem, but (If this isn't what you wanted then you should have made it so ...