Logowrites

That was lovely, it showed compasion and how he cared for her. I love how you used those similies and metaphors. however, it seemed a little to good to be ...

good but you keep repeating yourself, its really good story line, I like how you said everything overall it was a great story! i'll give it a 8/10

LOVE IT!!!!! THE WAS AMAZING WITH THE FOAM AND THE RYMES IT WA PERFECT!!! I FOUND IT VERY HAPPY!!!!!!! I SMILED THROUGH THE WHOLE THING!!!!!!!!! THIS WAS AWESOME I SAW ...

I love it, the salty wet sand? beautiful. other things I loved about it 1. the last paragraph, the further i will fall? awesome I love your words. 2. my ...

3 reasons I loved it 1. it was suspenseful, I love how he did cut her leg a little bit, perfect you let be real, but you should put a ...

I loved the twist, and the emerald green eyes just for a second though for she fell dead in my arms, priceless! I love it, it's great I mean I'll ...

This is really funny and good! I loved how it felt real because it was. I loved how the diolouge was I loved it! It was hilarious! I loved the ...

I Love the last paragraph thats beautiful, i just love it, its perfect! I love how you wrote it. it was awesome. soo epic!!!! haha. Maybe you make a sequal ...

I love how in the beginning you thought it would be an old enemy but it's her friend! that is brilliant! Also like meep said you threw me off by ...

This is magnificint!!! I mean it kept me reading and it leaves you hanging. Is she going to walk off or live? This is brilliant. I loved how she was ...

it's pretty good! just it seems text book. so put maybe a simile or a metaphor in there.