Shizzle mah nizzle in duh hizzle! (fo rizzle!)
Whether in drizzle or sunizzle that’ll make you sizzle on the skizzle
I’m down wit mah bros and my hoes have no toes (that blows!)
I can’t even strike a pose or say yo without mah nose…
Nothin shows dat I have foes wearing bows,
They’re all lined up in rows with their woes and pet crows (They names all be Joe)
Let’s hope they don’t overdose in the river that flows!
I’ll give her a rose, though it froze at the close
I need some help at Lowes so just give me some dough!
Fool I can sew and you just got pwned!
No one gave me a loan under stars that shone…
We coulda flown outta the zone, but now I groan
Cuz I’ve got nothing to own but drones and mah clones!
And they’re all blown and wear cologne from Gabon (I know)
So I sit and moan on mah lonely old throne…
And with all the skillz they hone deep in their bones,
They’re still very prone to getting thrown into foam!
A gnome that lives in a dome took a comb from your home!
So you stole it’s floam!
Only you find out it wasn’t their floam
…You stole someone’s floam
Das not good O_O
LOVE IT!!!!! THE WAS AMAZING WITH THE FOAM AND THE RYMES IT WA PERFECT!!! I FOUND IT VERY HAPPY!!!!!!! I SMILED THROUGH THE WHOLE THING!!!!!!!!! THIS WAS AWESOME I SAW AS A RAP, AND LOVED IT AS I KEEP SAYING, THE RYMES WERE AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GREAT JOB
Well...I am not sure exactly what I just read but isn't that the beauty of music, and especially rap? You don't have to understand it always. I'm...I'm not sure what the message you were trying to put out here, but perhaps in the future it would be more beneficial to try and reach out to your readers by making rap songs from life experiences and a little more thought in your lyrics. Keep writing though. Always keep writing.
It's a good thing this is in the lyrics section and not the poetry section.
It looks like you put in a lot of work in this rap.
To be honest, I have no idea what I just read. I think it's something about hoes being drones in domes and sewing gnomes.
First of all, is there any rap song that has just one rhyme?
What's 'pnwed'? At first I though it was a new slang i was unaware of, but now it seems to me that you meant to write 'owned' (the 10th line).
If I understood this, I would have said it's really funny.
Although I hope you're not thinking of going into music :p