Logan15

Hello hello! I'm Logan, and I'm going to review your wonderful poem! When I look at a poem first, I scan for length. Not for length of poems, but for ...

Hello!! I'm Logan, and I'm going to write a review for your awesome poem! (You may cheer) First off, one of the things I noticed was that the stanzas don't ...

Wow This is beautiful This is clearly one of the finest pieces of literature about crows that I have ever seen. I love the different uses of different lengths and ...

Hello! I'm not sure if this was intentional or not, but I like the use of solely lowercase letters. It helps to add a visual aspect of the plainness and ...

Our Story Hello! I'm writing this as I read so you can get my honest reactions to everything. How We Met And Fell In Love You wrote a beautiful description ...

Hello! I really like the start of the story! It catches attention well and makes the people reading want to read even more of it. Great job! "Some of my ...

Hello! I like salt, too. One of my favorite parts is the repetition of "I like salt." I enjoy repetition in poems, especially when it ties in the title. I ...

At first, I was asking why some letters were bolded. Then I read what the letters spelled, and it's really, really cute! Now, let's talk about the other words of ...

Wow I love this I love then every line is a metaphor, and that all the metaphors are related and combined at the end (With the "all these gems make ...

Hello! The story of Medusa has been told for a very, very long time, and it has many parts that differ from one retelling to the next. In some, Athena ...

Hello! First off, this is a great poem! Short and sweet, with a lot of great imagery. What I love most about this poem is that each of the four ...

Hello! This is beautiful. I love it But... why do I love it? In the first confession, I love the little bits of repetition. This happens with 'somewhere' and 'somehow,' ...

Hello! First off, I love how you started each stanza with "Yes, I know I'm..." and how you kept a general pattern in each stanza. I love when people do ...

Hello! Personally, I do really like the title. How I see it, it ties in the poem being about places and emotions/things no human should feel. At least, that's how ...

Hello! To start, I LOVE how you recapped the previous chapters. I like the formatting, and they were good summaries! They were straight to the point and didn't include unnecessary ...