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LizzyTyler

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  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Hiding

    Hey, Lizzy here for a review! First, I absolutely loved your poem. I loved the style, and how you incorporated real feelings, and real experiences. The flow of your poem ...

    May 13, 2021
  • Poetry » Science, Dramatic Re: genetically modified organisms

    That floored me. Just . . . Wow. My class probably thinks I'm insane. Don't mind the person laughing their head off in the corner of the google meet. XD ...

    May 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: intrusive thoughts

    Wow. Just . . . Wow. That was incredible. I loved the pure, mess of words that came out and flowed together to become this tangle of emotions. That was ...

    May 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Be Yourself

    Good Morning/Evening/Night! First, I would like to tel you that this was a great poem. I love how you related it to nature! My favorite part was when it said ...

    May 10, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: The Storm

    This was great! I loved how well written it was! So first, I loved the symbolism of the sea, as well as the less obvious metaphor of the storm. The ...

    May 9, 2021
  • Poetry » Science Fiction, General Re: A Proverb Of Mankind

    Hi! I liked this poem, so I’m going to review it! First, some of the best poems are written in 5-10 minutes (or in the shower in my case :P). ...

    May 8, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Liar

    Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening! I really loved your poem! It started with four stanza's each one with four lines. They each spoke of a different type of lies, and of masks that ...

    Apr 27, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: crows gather at the funerals of their own children

    This was beautiful. It was heartfelt, and real, tapping into raw emotions like grief, and the feeling that no one will truly understand. I really loved the double lines. I ...

    Apr 27, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: The night

    Hello, this is Lizzy, First, I would like to say this was a beautiful poem. I am not sure if this is the meaning you meant, but I interpreted it ...

    Apr 27, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: The Rain Song

    Good Morning! I liked this poem, and what it talked about. I LOVED how it compared the sound of the rain to a relationship. But, when I was reading it, ...

    Apr 24, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: One Missed Train

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    I am sorry for the repeat, my computer glitched.😥

    Apr 24, 2021
  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: Dragonslaying is Not a Viable Career Path

    I.....wow. That just made my day, and my day has been pretty great. :) That was a brilliant composition of a lighthearted and comical poem. It made me, and most ...

    Apr 24, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: Letter To A Lost One

    Good Morning/Evening/Night, This was a very powerful piece, and it definitely tugged at my heartstrings. I, personally, have never lost someone close to me, but that seems like how it ...

    Apr 23, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Unsaid

    Hello, Hi. I was reading your poem, and I absolutely loved it. My favorite type of poem is the short, unhindered, and heartfelt ones everyone can relate to. I once ...

    Apr 23, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Return Of The Heir Prologue

    Hello, So, I was reading your prologue, and I noticed that it seemed to be a beginning of a story. Usually, a prologue is a flashback, like in the perspective ...

    Apr 23, 2021


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