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Re: Hiding
Hey, Lizzy here for a review! First, I absolutely loved your poem. I loved the style, and how you incorporated real feelings, and real experiences. The flow of your poem ...
May 13, 2021 -
Re: genetically modified organisms
That floored me. Just . . . Wow. My class probably thinks I'm insane. Don't mind the person laughing their head off in the corner of the google meet. XD ...
May 12, 2021 -
Re: intrusive thoughts
Wow. Just . . . Wow. That was incredible. I loved the pure, mess of words that came out and flowed together to become this tangle of emotions. That was ...
May 12, 2021 -
Re: Be Yourself
Good Morning/Evening/Night! First, I would like to tel you that this was a great poem. I love how you related it to nature! My favorite part was when it said ...
May 10, 2021 -
Re: The Storm
This was great! I loved how well written it was! So first, I loved the symbolism of the sea, as well as the less obvious metaphor of the storm. The ...
May 9, 2021 -
Re: A Proverb Of Mankind
Hi! I liked this poem, so I’m going to review it! First, some of the best poems are written in 5-10 minutes (or in the shower in my case :P). ...
May 8, 2021 -
Re: Liar
Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening! I really loved your poem! It started with four stanza's each one with four lines. They each spoke of a different type of lies, and of masks that ...
Apr 27, 2021 -
Re: crows gather at the funerals of their own children
This was beautiful. It was heartfelt, and real, tapping into raw emotions like grief, and the feeling that no one will truly understand. I really loved the double lines. I ...
Apr 27, 2021 -
Re: The night
Hello, this is Lizzy, First, I would like to say this was a beautiful poem. I am not sure if this is the meaning you meant, but I interpreted it ...
Apr 27, 2021 -
Re: The Rain Song
Good Morning! I liked this poem, and what it talked about. I LOVED how it compared the sound of the rain to a relationship. But, when I was reading it, ...
Apr 24, 2021 -
Re: One Missed Train
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Apr 24, 2021
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Re: Dragonslaying is Not a Viable Career Path
I.....wow. That just made my day, and my day has been pretty great. :) That was a brilliant composition of a lighthearted and comical poem. It made me, and most ...
Apr 24, 2021 -
Re: Letter To A Lost One
Good Morning/Evening/Night, This was a very powerful piece, and it definitely tugged at my heartstrings. I, personally, have never lost someone close to me, but that seems like how it ...
Apr 23, 2021 -
Re: Unsaid
Hello, Hi. I was reading your poem, and I absolutely loved it. My favorite type of poem is the short, unhindered, and heartfelt ones everyone can relate to. I once ...
Apr 23, 2021 -
Re: Return Of The Heir Prologue
Hello, So, I was reading your prologue, and I noticed that it seemed to be a beginning of a story. Usually, a prologue is a flashback, like in the perspective ...
Apr 23, 2021
