Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
First Impression: Well...this one has quite a bit packed into it here...despite being as small as it is. Aaand well...pretty sad situation there...also some very nice description there..well...anyway let's get down to some more details here.
Anyway let's get right to it,
There was a storm coming. It was going to be a bad one.
Getting right into the action there....wonderful entrance there...I don't why I'm laughing though...its just soo straight to the point there.
Om could feel the humidity on his skin, the condensation teasing the hairs on his upper arm into a standing position. It meant he had to take the cows in early, before they were properly fed, which in turn meant the milk would be bad. His wife would be displeased. Though, there was hardly ever a time when she wasn’t.
Hmm...well...the storm is definitely terrible, but it looks like the storm inside his house is potentially a bit worse judging by the way that he spits out that last line in a very matter of fact way there.
He and his wife had a relationship like the sea; turbulent and two-faced. The waters would be calm one moment, almost gentle, lapping at his toes like an obedient dog. Then something would stir them up, riling them, teasing them higher and higher and higher until they crashed on him and wouldn’t release until he begged for breath using waterlogged lungs.
And that is a beautiful metaphor for what sounds like an absolutely terrible situation to have in a home there...oh dear...the poor guy.
The first few drops of rain fell. He could feel it on his skin, and saw it on the grimy paint of the white picket fence he was leaning on. The sky was darkening.
He sighed, the dense air lingering in his throat. Thunder cracked as he looked back towards the cottage he shared with his wife. He knew she would be in there, pacing about, just waiting to complain as soon as he walked through the door. You said you would buy this. You haven’t paid for this. This is all your fault.
Oh gosh...the anticipation of the storm's arriving is mixing strangely well with his anticipation for running into his wife here. Well...that is doing quite a lot to show just how terrible this guy's situation is here.
Glancing out at the sky one final time, he thought back to the packed suitcase under his bed. The single, one way bus ticket for tonight. The new apartment waiting for him in the city.
There was a storm coming, but Om wouldn’t be around to see it.
Ohhhh...now seee....this...this ties it all together...cause I believe this storm we're talking about is the inevitable explosion by his wife when he leaves, isn't it...that's what this coming storm seems to be about at least...or have I over thought this as I inevitably do every time.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
Overall: Overall this makes for quite an interesting little piece here. But well...that's about all I've gotta say here. Catch ya again some other time.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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