LittlePetRock

'Ello there! A shock. Like lightning. The first. Two. Line. Read. Like. This. All choppy and such. Bleh. Leaps from your hand to mine. What does it mean? Is it ...

'Ello there! LPR here to review! :D Trying to break my own knife, and failing to dust my lost pen. To write this pain, that's so hard to swallow, as ...

Hey Chlorine! (I came up with it, don't ask. {I thought about PurpleHeart... which made me think of PH... wich somehow made me think of swimming... which made me think ...

Rebecca: She always said that the world looked brighter from her shoes. Her shoes were lovely, funnier and most importantly full of love. Mine were somewhat antonyms of all the ...

Awwww! Sounds like you've got the love bug, how wonderful it is, yes? :) In your arms Big and strong I find solace . Should put a period there, in ...

'Ello there! Nice poem, I love baseball! Baseballs fly at your head By: Adomis76 The batter was standing, as the boy pitched. Standing, well obviously. Maybe change that to a ...

I agree with Kafka... this poem needs serious work. But writing can be like a diamond, sometimes you have to chip away the ugly to find a magnificent, sparkly, breathtaking ...

I adore Spongebob, and I quite enjoy this!! Sweet-natured little yellow sponge , your Pores and craters are splashes On that square canvas, to accompany that I wished this could ...

Hey there Nike! I really liked this short story, I love the way her mind is buzzing constantly. Only a few nit-picks: 1. Her full first name isn't even mentioned. ...

Happy review day! LPR, here to review. Though, admittedly, I'm horrible at reviewing poetry! But I shall try my best! So my favorite line most of all was this: BOOM. ...

Hey KAH! Hmm... Rocky likey. Muchly. I agree with Vas, though it is very short it grabs the readers attention very well. I can't wait to read more of it! ...

Hey there, LPR to review! Nice story, I hope you decide to continue this! Please message me when you post more! It's very gripping and leaves the reader begging for ...

This story made me: :D "Aww!" :O "Rain!" :) "Awww!" :shock: "Noo!" :shock: :( -cries- :) -cries more- I. Loved. This. It made me smile for you. A couple of ...

Hey there Flit! Well, I must say, I'm a bit confused by the transition from the first line to the second. It's like I had a movie playing in my ...

Hi there! Have no fear, LPR is here! 8) RED = parts that I fixed. BLUE = bits that I liked. UNDERLINED = Nit-picks. I took a deep breath of ...