LittleLee

Yay, we get to see Carris again! I missed her. :) It seemed that despite sleeping for at least a full night, it had not been entirely restful. Why the ...

Duuuuude. Well done. I actually don't hate Malcolm anymore. He's far from my favourite character, but it's not as easy to dislike him strongly anymore. A lotta writers have comically ...

Hallo! This chapter was nice to read! I'm a sucker for scenes where characters wake up in a mysterious person's house, brought back from the brink of death. It gives ...

They had consumed two rabbits that Devlin had roasted over an open fire, but those had been so dry and void of flavor that Gwyn barely touched them. How did ...

Ahhh, this was a pretty good chapter. Devlin had given her his fire-starting kit, something that had surprised her, but she had taken without argument. I have a suggestion. Edit ...

Hello again! I'll begin by saying straight off that this actually felt like a new chapter. The previous chapters were almost all direct continuations of each other, which made the ...

Greetings! I'm jumping right in. This chapter was a little anticlimactic; while Martius' little accident was quite humourous, the way it ended made me wonder why Carris and Devlin snuck ...

Hello, Messenger, it's me again! This chapter was slow paced compared to the previous ones, but still of the same high quality. I have a suggestion, though; combine this chapter ...

I have given up on finding a new way to begin my review each time, so I shall plunge right into the content. The smoke was tangible in the dark, ...

Now I'm really confused. He could see them now. Both were Sadorians , but whereas one was much older, bearded and covered in animal skins with a long, bloodied, sword ...

Gosh, that was a great chapter! Devlin's action sequence was quite well written, although I maintain that he should have had the sense to plug the bottle cap entrance. I ...

Hello again! This chapter was a pretty good pay-off to the last two. I'm invested enough in the characters and even the mean villagers to worry for them now that ...

Loving the plot so far. And Gwyn is an absolute sweetheart. I shall protect her with my life. A few murmurs from those trying to sleep on the miserably rough ...

Ooh, character development. I like. Devlin stumbled behind Carris for a few yards as they felt their way along a narrow crevice in the rock, devoid of all sunlight. Isn't ...

Greeting you every time feels a bit silly, so henceforth I'm going to plunge directly into the review. Okay, the first thought I had after reading this chapter is that ...