LittleLee

Hey there! You insert too many spaces in unnecessary areas. Don't. Anyway, the first stanza is just beautiful, you have expressed the poem perfectly, will done. The second stanza is ...

Hey, LittleLee here for a review! I just love the jovial tone you have taken fur this hilarious poem! It's this about review day, by any chance? Second line : ...

LittleLee here for a review! The poem is really sweet, and rather well written, frankly speaking. This review will be rather short because there isn't much to say that is ...

Hello, LittleLee here for a review! Well, as usual, I'll start with negatives. The poem need to be punctuated, as it has become a monotonous read without even so much ...

LittleLee's here for a review! Look, I have never reviewed your work, so forgive me if I sound too critical. I will start with the negatives of this poem, and ...

Hi, LittleLee here for a review! Since this is only your second poem that I am reviewing, I do not know your style of writing. As a result, my review ...

LittleLee's here for a review! Let us begin, shall we? Alright, negatives first - so you do not need to finish reading the review with a sour taste in your ...

LittleLee's here for a review!! I agree with what Lumi said, and I have a few more things to say: I think the first line is just too long and ...

Hey, Little here for a review! The poem is fun, that's for sure. I quite like it for its random sense of humour and enjoyment! There are a few things ...

LittleLee here for a review!! So, the poem is really, really well written. But in the first stanza, you could have left a gap between the line "cars quickly rush ...

Hey, Lee's here for a review! Positives-- You have expressed yourself quite well, and fit your first pen, this is really good! Negatives-- Who is the person you are taking ...

This is really well written, but I feel you shouldn't use "you". Of course, this is just a matter of opinion, but still. Don't express the emotions too much, because ...

Wow! This poem is really, really beautiful. I just love the way you have expressed yourself from when you were a toddler to now. I can only envy your writing ...

This story is really nice. Most people crave for powers like fire-control, but you tapped into a new type of magic altogether. "A little magic can take you a long ...

I LOVED this poem. Generally if someone dies then you hardly hear about it. This poem has brought out into the light that which should not be forgotten. The only ...