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LittleLee

Life before death. Strength before weakness. Journey before destination.

  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: A Souls Heaven-3 A Poem Seriel

    Hey there, LittleLee's here for a review!! Starting off. I WORSHIP cats. Like, seriously. And kittens? My god, poor things. Firstly, I want to know - does this poem ho ...

    Apr 29, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: mouche noire

    Heya! LittleLee's here for a review! I love love poems. Probably because I'm hopeless at love. I really enjoyed reading this poem, as you might expect. I honestly don't like ...

    Apr 29, 2018
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Mystery of Life-NaPow 5

    Hey, Lee's here for a review! Starting off with the minus parts of the poem, alright? I mean, the parts that I don't like. Others may like them, of course! ...

    Apr 29, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Fall

    Hey there, all you administrators! Here comes the craziest wolf on Earth to review your work! I truly love the various themes of this amazing poem, and i love the ...

    Apr 14, 2018
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: speechless

    Hey, Little here for a review! First off, I think it needs a better beginning. It sounds like it's a half finished poem, or one that was cut up. But ...

    Apr 8, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I Hope Death is a Gentleman

    Hey Little here for a review! My first in a long time, actually. Consider yourself lucky! Anyway, I really like the whole concept of the poem. Painting Death's image as ...

    Apr 6, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I've Got This, Maybe

    Heya, Flum! Firstly, I liked the poem quite a lot, but I didn't understand it completely. For example, if the monster goes out, then technically it does leave the narrator ...

    Dec 8, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Blanket Threads and Flower Petals

    Aww man, you should publish your stuff. This is really sweet! So, I didn't get this part, where at one point you describe the quilt and then describe yourself as ...

    Dec 5, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I Can't Write, I Can't Me.

    Oh. Oh my. FLUMADIDDLE HOW CAN YOU SAY THIS WE ARE ALL THERE FOR YOU NOOOOOOOO DON'T THINK LIKE THIS HOW COULD YOU MY INVOX IS ALWAYS OPEN TO YOU ...

    Dec 2, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A poem of YWS

    Heya, Bluecat The poem is very nice, I'm surprised at the topic! Most people may not think of writing about the very site they use! But, there are a few ...

    Dec 2, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: hello

    Heya, DemonGoddess! Well, starting off, I really like the way you've built up the poem, beginning with how you met the friend, and how it all ended. I really don't ...

    Nov 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Dear mama...

    Here cometh LittleLee for a review! My mother never said these sort of things to me, except one or two times maybe, so I don't really relate to what you ...

    Nov 26, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: MY BABY GIRL

    Here I am for a review! Awww, this poem's first lines are really sweet... But, I dont like the use of capital letters. And don't shorten "you" to "u". This ...

    Nov 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: Chapter 3 of my fanfiction

    Hey, LittleLee's here to review your work! Forgive me if there are any mistakes, I'm writing this on a very loony tablet that keeps doing things without asking me. It ...

    Nov 26, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Culture, General Re: Can Charity be an Investment?

    Hey there, LittleLee here for a review! So, anyway, this is a rather interesting topic, and you have put up a very good argument. But, I haven't been a student ...

    Nov 26, 2017


That's how we should measure our lives. Not in distance traveled, or time passed, or worlds conquered, but in moments... and the rush of joy—of grace—that exists within them.
— Megatron (Lost Light, by Roberts, Lawrence, Lafuente)