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Re: A Souls Heaven-3 A Poem Seriel
Hey there, LittleLee's here for a review!! Starting off. I WORSHIP cats. Like, seriously. And kittens? My god, poor things. Firstly, I want to know - does this poem ho ...
Apr 29, 2018 -
Re: mouche noire
Heya! LittleLee's here for a review! I love love poems. Probably because I'm hopeless at love. I really enjoyed reading this poem, as you might expect. I honestly don't like ...
Apr 29, 2018 -
Re: Mystery of Life-NaPow 5
Hey, Lee's here for a review! Starting off with the minus parts of the poem, alright? I mean, the parts that I don't like. Others may like them, of course! ...
Apr 29, 2018 -
Re: Fall
Hey there, all you administrators! Here comes the craziest wolf on Earth to review your work! I truly love the various themes of this amazing poem, and i love the ...
Apr 14, 2018 -
Re: speechless
Hey, Little here for a review! First off, I think it needs a better beginning. It sounds like it's a half finished poem, or one that was cut up. But ...
Apr 8, 2018 -
Re: I Hope Death is a Gentleman
Hey Little here for a review! My first in a long time, actually. Consider yourself lucky! Anyway, I really like the whole concept of the poem. Painting Death's image as ...
Apr 6, 2018 -
Re: I've Got This, Maybe
Heya, Flum! Firstly, I liked the poem quite a lot, but I didn't understand it completely. For example, if the monster goes out, then technically it does leave the narrator ...
Dec 8, 2017 -
Re: Blanket Threads and Flower Petals
Aww man, you should publish your stuff. This is really sweet! So, I didn't get this part, where at one point you describe the quilt and then describe yourself as ...
Dec 5, 2017 -
Re: I Can't Write, I Can't Me.
Oh. Oh my. FLUMADIDDLE HOW CAN YOU SAY THIS WE ARE ALL THERE FOR YOU NOOOOOOOO DON'T THINK LIKE THIS HOW COULD YOU MY INVOX IS ALWAYS OPEN TO YOU ...
Dec 2, 2017 -
Re: A poem of YWS
Heya, Bluecat The poem is very nice, I'm surprised at the topic! Most people may not think of writing about the very site they use! But, there are a few ...
Dec 2, 2017 -
Re: hello
Heya, DemonGoddess! Well, starting off, I really like the way you've built up the poem, beginning with how you met the friend, and how it all ended. I really don't ...
Nov 29, 2017 -
Re: Dear mama...
Here cometh LittleLee for a review! My mother never said these sort of things to me, except one or two times maybe, so I don't really relate to what you ...
Nov 26, 2017 -
Re: MY BABY GIRL
Here I am for a review! Awww, this poem's first lines are really sweet... But, I dont like the use of capital letters. And don't shorten "you" to "u". This ...
Nov 26, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 3 of my fanfiction
Hey, LittleLee's here to review your work! Forgive me if there are any mistakes, I'm writing this on a very loony tablet that keeps doing things without asking me. It ...
Nov 26, 2017 -
Re: Can Charity be an Investment?
Hey there, LittleLee here for a review! So, anyway, this is a rather interesting topic, and you have put up a very good argument. But, I haven't been a student ...
Nov 26, 2017
