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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Balance - Chapter 3.1

    Hello and happy review day! As always, your writing style is a pleasure to read. I'm happy to see this chapter moving in a more defined direction. Of course, the ...

    Feb 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: LAPIS :Chapter 30: (THE FINAL CHAPTER)

    Woooo alright last chapter and just in time for review day! I don't want it to be over, but that's just too bad I suppose and I'm excite to see ...

    Feb 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Balance - Chapter 2.2

    Hello, me again. :) Again, I pretty much only have praise for you. I'm really falling in love with your story and your characters. The only criticism I can think ...

    Feb 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Balance - Chapter 2.1

    Hello! LittleFox here to review again! I'm really glad I stumbled across this story because i really like it a lot. There's no doubt that if I came across this ...

    Feb 18, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Younger Days

    Hi there! I was looking for things to review and I realized that I had completely forgotten that you have things submitted on here other than LAPIS :P So, down ...

    Feb 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Balance - Chapter 1 [First Draft]

    Hello there, LittleFox here to review! I really like this story a lot already! The tone and wording are both wonderful; a little bit dark and mysterious. So it looks ...

    Feb 17, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: Eight Reasons Why I Kissed Hayden Beaufort (Part 6/8)

    Yeess this story keeps getting better! I'm going to be sad when I finish this and have to find a new story to follow. :( Like always your writing style ...

    Feb 17, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: A Letter to Raven

    Hello! LittleFox here to review. Wow, this was amazing! I was very captivated by this from the very start. I'm not even sure what I can say about it now, ...

    Feb 15, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: Eight Reasons Why I Kissed Hayden Beaufort (Part 5/8)

    Your writing is perfection! I'm surprised by how captivated I am by your story since I usually only stick to historical fiction. The reason I usually would stay away from ...

    Feb 15, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Romantic Re: LAPIS :Chapter 29:

    Yes finally! I'm glad you posted this; I really loved this chapter a lot. I've always enjoyed the transition from grief to this sort of happy-sad thing at the end. ...

    Feb 15, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Circle Of Stones- Chapter I

    Hello, LittleFox here to reveiw! I really liked this and I would love to see an extension to this. The tone is beautiful; a bit somber and thoughtful. I also ...

    Feb 2, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Never Missed.

    Hello! LittleFox here to review your poem :) Overall I like this poem a lot. It has a nice tone and pacing. I especially love the first line. It works ...

    Jan 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: Eight Reasons Why I Kissed Hayden Beaufort (Part 3/8)

    Ooh I really liked the cliff hanger you left this one on. It really keeps getting better and keeps making me want to read on. You have a great talent ...

    Jan 20, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: Eight Reasons Why I Kissed Hayden Beaufort (Part 2/8)

    Hi, it's me again! I really liked this part a lot. The story is becoming more captivating and I'm loving it more with every sentence. The only thing I would ...

    Jan 20, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: Eight Reasons Why I Kissed Hayden Beaufort (Part 1/8)

    Hi there! LittleFox here :) I'm really grateful for all the advice you've given me on my novel, so I thought I would return the favor and write some reviews ...

    Jan 20, 2015


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