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This is beautifully clever! The truth is, it's just about flawless; it's awesome! I cannot stress that enough. Very well done,liv1997! Your work here feels very human and honest. I ...

Everyone has the attributes and qualities to be a leader? I see what you're saying, but you should probably word it as, "Does everyone have the attributes and qualities to ...

What a poem! My, I guess the writer's block stopped. Anyway, this is awesome! Every line is well worded. At the start, I didn't understand where it was all going. ...

Wow! This poem is thoroughly enjoyable. It typifies the thought of being short and sweet. It has not only powerful imagery and description but also a warm, informal style. I'm ...

Ooh, ah, ooh! You continue to impress, my friend. I quite enjoyed this first chapter. Having read the fourth chapter before this, I thought that Dannel would gain the imp, ...

This is amazing! Talk about originality, and I didn't even read the other chapters! Well done, BiscuitsBatchAvoy. I can't really break this down much, but I'll try. I tell you, ...

What can I say? I found myself annoyed at certain points (I've said this before, but, oh, it's important.) by the lack of description of the environment; and at other ...

I can't quite tell what is going on, but that is because I haven't been reading it. To me, it's always seemed that you didn't really describe the environment enough ...

I really don't have much to tell you since this is so short, but my overall impression was good. You're right: it is somewhat boring, but at points in books, ...

I liked this; there is good wording which illustrates reverence for God (as in "my undeserving soul") and your hope in life after death. I don't know if "Eden" is ...

Oh, my bones! How has no one given you the praise this deserves! Sonnets are incredibly hard to write. (At least, I think they are; I have tried to write ...

Well done! Again, that realistic dialogue is present, making the story always more tangible. Furthermore, I liked how you had everything put together: each event flowed very naturally into the ...

You wrote this at 11? Well done! Much praise thou deservest, for I like it. You used colorful words to describe your mother; you referenced several old sayings, which makes ...

I must say, you have left me almost speechless. This was certainly interesting; humor, realistic dialogue, personality--all of that was here. I appreciate your narrator's humanity. In fact, everything

Though I am about to be negative, I tell you I do rather like this. However, the poem is unbearably uninformative. What are you saying here? Children change. Yes, most ...