LilPWilly

I just wanted to add a quick explanation and breakdown of this poem. Firstly, the Spanish lines approximately translate to: I am completely alone I want/love you I am cold ...

A decade later, and still I say, bravo

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Thanks!

Thanks Jay!

HAHHAHA Nice.

Thanks! You're right on both counts, I did try to put stanzas in.

Thanks haha That bad taste line is one of my favorites

Awww cute

Thanks haha No deeper meaning. Just a kiss. I thought that focusing on the text messages would be an interesting perspective, I'm glad you mentioned that.

In case it's not clear, the dialogue is a series of texts from her best friend, hence the ding.

Wow intriguing. I'm at a christian school, so this sort of stuff doesn't really happen. Im honestly surprised you went with him to all these shady spots lol but I ...

Wow. I could feel it through the screen. The visual of tissue paper is so effective. I expected something else, I expected a run of the mill commentary on anxiety. ...

I'm curious, who's the boy? This is such a pretty poem.

Pretty poem.