Lightsong

I just knew it'd lead to something sad. ;-;

Thanks for the review! And yeah, it goes to a chronology, from scribbles > using tracing paper > actually using colours (should say colouring xD) > painting with watercolours, hating ...

Well, since I have this assumption because of her thoughts, it would be clearer if you mention they aren't logical. You're using third person of view, so it's okay to ...

Nice lyrics. ;)

Don't worry, the fly just struck again. xD

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Hey, thanks for the review! You've been very helpful. :D Tbh, I'm still figuring out their characters. Rachelle is pretty much the easiest to figure out, because she's similar with ...

Thanks for the review! Ah, I see! I thought a bane is like what makes things stronger, y'know? xD I think I'll use backbone instead.

I'm so happy with this review! This is a structured poem, and I won't tell you in what way, but the fact that you relate to this with Annabelle from ...

Thanks for the review! :D Yeah, this one is weaker than LLC, because it's an old piece for an old contest. xD It's not excuse to improve, ofc. :3

Ah! I do want to make it so that she is seen emotional; I want to make it so that her words show she hates the one who causes it, ...

I've edited the first line; I hope you can comment on it. :D

Hey, thanks for the review! :D I totally agree with what you've said about the fantasy element in this short story. You see, the only fantastical about the world I've ...

Ah! Thanks for the review! This is actually a follow-up to the first short story, Serena, the Colours, and the Death. Obviously this one needs to stand on its own ...

This is interesting. Poke me later for review.