Lightsong

Hey, I'm here to leave a quick review! :D An empire made of ash, a throne of debris, a crown of bone. Her eyes mimicked the deepest oceans and the ...

Hey, I'm here to review! :D Oh damn it, the first two lines are just wonderful. The first one tricks us into thinking this is going to be a lighthearted ...

Hey, I'm here to review! :D We hide behind masks every day. In our effort to match society's expectations, we compromise our own idea and way of looking beautiful and ...

Hey, I'm here to review! :D I've been wanting to review one of your chapters given how popular it is ;) but I don't have the motivation to actually read ...

Hey, I’m here to review! :D So, after they left—after a somewhat awkward few hours—Nikki rounded on Ivy. I’m pretty sure you can start the sentence without ‘so’; it’s unneeded. ...

Hey, I’m here to review! She hadn't eaten in a day, she was tired, thirsty, hungry, her body ached, and it felt as though her life was on the verge ...

Hey, I'm here to review! :D Her mouth feels as though she's eaten cotton and her body feels drowsy, but at least she's definitely more awake now. The adverb 'definitely' ...

Hey, I'm here to review. :D Sentence-level Suggestions I got out of bed at first light the next morning, a skip in my step as I pulled on my clothes ...

Hey, I'm here to review! :D Oh. My. God. This is easily a chilly poem. Like, seriously. You use simple words, but they paint a direct, powerful images in my ...

Hey, I'm here to review! :D Surely Hisster must realize the risk he was taking? Based on the first paragraph, I think Zoltar has explained well enough about the risk ...

Oh my god, this piece has a review already. I need to snatch it from the Green Room before anyone else does. :P Sentence-level Suggestions These have nothing to do ...

Hey, I’m here to review! :D She's hit by smell of herbs and wrinkles it at the all scents. After ‘wrinkles’, I can’t understand this sentence. I suggest to rephrase ...

Hey, it's me to review! It's been a while since I criticize a poem, so please bear with me. :D In a general outlook, this poem pretty much relies on ...

Hey, I'm here to review! :D “We’ll be back in three days, Mother, I swear,” Ayda said, speaking quietly and quickly. I would suggest to remove the Mother part entirely ...

Hey, I'm here to review. :D I like this! It's very fantasy-like and mysterious. The idea of dragons is simply common, and yet you make it fresh by giving them ...