Lightsong

Hey, bellathebookworm. :) Alright. First of all, I like this poem. Its simplicity makes the message delivering effective. I usually comment on the lack of punctuations in a poem, simply ...

Hey, MemoryHunters. :) The night is frightening mistress Wrapped in her translucent silk. Her hands outstretched, Strangling my mind to think. I like this imagery; it's simple and yet effective. ...

Hey, Youandnovels. I'm here to review in exchange for yours ! :D I like the description when they teleport. It seems like you've done well to make sure every detail ...

Hey, wolfsbane :) First thing I notice is the frequent capitalization of words. Remember, words, when capitalized, mean they were more important than usual--that they hold specific positions in the ...

Hey. :) The bad thing about being in love with someone of the same gender as you are the sick people who think it’s wrong. This works as an opening ...

Hey. :) I flipped on my television and saw Trump, I could compare his hair to a camels hump, He was to dumb for me so I made a channel ...

Hey, AliceAfternoon. :) Her footsteps are slow and heavy. Her mind is a fluster of disoriented colors, and she moves as if she is deep in custard. I really like ...

Hey, xPrinceDaniex, chris. I'm here to review this... piece. ;) First of all, I just want to say I was completely deceived by the description of this work. It was ...

Hey, Songmorning. :) The first home Jiminy Cricket and Kaelin Mouse chose for themselves was a small, partially-hollowed stump in the forest near the orphanage. The stump was dark brown, ...

Hey, Tigerlilly37. :) The moon has now risen, Stars dance among the skies as we meet beneath the glimmering streetlight and our hands intertwine. I like the imagery here; it ...

Hey, Songmorning. :) In response to Bridget’s application, Granny regretfully explained that the diner didn’t actually need extra help, and she couldn’t afford to hire a superfluous employee. Ce

Hey, Alice. :D The first thing I noticed after reading your poem was that your punctuations were off at some place. Here's an example: my soul will weep, in remembrance. ...

Hey, I'm here for a short review! :D Words I dreamed; Constant craving, Carved from nothing, For those brown eyes That still glance at me, And stir something For that ...

Hey! It's been a while since I read this, so here I am, popping out of nowhere! xD Mr. Talisman is more wintry than yesterday’s cold and snow and more ...

Hey! :D Seven long years passed in the orphanage. Kaelin and Geppetto were teenagers now, and soon they would be old enough to leave. Kaelin desperately wanted to leave. Nothing ...