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Re: Tears She Cries
This is great. There is only a few typo's that need to be fixed. The first thing is that this line: "There are no answers you can only hide." It ...
Dec 17, 2013 -
Re: I Want To Fall In Love With a Writer
Oh my, I absolutely love this. I really do, Honestly, I couldn't find anything wrong with it. It flowed well, and it sounded amazing out loud. My favorite stanza by ...
Dec 17, 2013 -
Re: Just Another Shadow
Hey there, first off I'd like to say I enjoyed this. Really, I mean it. "I can feel myself fading- Every single piece of me." You start off great, and ...
Dec 16, 2013 -
Re: The Terrifying Camps; Memories of a Dead Man
This was a very good poem, and it's not on the usual topic. And I like that. There was only one thing wrong. And it was just a typo. In ...
Apr 29, 2013 -
Re: Come with me
Hey there arianaSarroyo, I'm going to start this by saying that I really liked this, it was cute, and you could tell what it was trying to express. That and ...
Apr 6, 2013 -
Re: For You
Hello Carlito, This is going to be a short review. First off, is this suppose to be a song? If it is, then it needs a little work to make ...
Apr 6, 2013 -
Re: Something About You
I honestly loved this! I just had one problem really. The verse, which i think it is. So I lied there is another thing. Sounded really choppy and it disrupted ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: I Am Here
Hey there Stori, I decided to review your song, obviously. I think it would be better with a rhythm, that's the first thing I'm going to suggest. Though I'm sorry ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: A Visual Spectacular
Hey I honestly enjoyed your poem. It reminded me of a fantasy book I read awhile ago. And i just adore how you used certain word here, like hyptonic, and ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: Revenge
This was really good. I enjoyed it. I only had one problem. You have your chorus labeled but that is it. And I can see you have and intro. You ...
Feb 11, 2013 -
Re: Falling Forever
It was really good. The only problem I had with this, Is that you didn't label anything else but the chorus. You have an intro, your verses and a coda/outro. ...
Feb 11, 2013 -
Re: Second chance
It's really good. There was really one thing that really bothered me. I don't want to repeat whats already been said, so that leaves one thing. You only label the ...
Feb 11, 2013 -
Re: Rescue Me
This was pretty good. There was only a few things that need a little work. One of them is when you get to the chorus, you have things bunched up, ...
Feb 11, 2013