Liaya

This is a really fun idea! I like some of the personalization that goes on for Willow here. (I'll admit, it's her name that caught my attention, because I have ...

Well, I'm certainly caught. My attention is officially snagged! I want to know what the character's dreams are, which ones died and which ones didn't, and how her life could ...

I love this! I think your use of winter snow is a brilliant way to start, because freshly fallen snow is so white and pure that it seems to symbolize ...

This is a wonderful little poem, full of imagery and wonderful flow. It does an excellent job of showing how lonely he is, even when in sleep, which should be ...

Oh, this is really sad. It makes me wish I was there to take her in my arms and tell her everything would be all right, to just hold on ...

This is gorgeous! Once again, I'm impressed with your skill. This one makes me wish it had a tune as beautiful as the words so I could learn it and ...

I think this is another lovely poem! You're a very good poet so far. I love that it seems sad and a little lonely. I also love how it's an ...

It's beautiful so far--but you're right, it isn't very hopeful. "But from the darkness, I hear my name" or some sort of change is called for in the next stanza, ...

This is a beautiful poem! I love how you manage to put such exquisite detail in with the joy and doubt and hope that comes from a marriage. I love ...

Haha, this made me think of my cat. She's fat and very jealous. She gets mad if I try giving me attention to any other cat! I love cats, but ...

I really like this poem! It tells a lot for being so short. I think it's an impressive stanza about childhood an innocence and what being a man is and ...

It's because we're masochists or something. Thank you so much for writing this! At the beginning, you say you don't think it's one of your best pieces, but I think ...

Oh, please do write more! I'm hooked. This is brilliantly well done! My heart was pounding a little by the end. This idea of emotionless empty people littering the world ...

Okay, I'm intrigued. Your descriptions are very vivid and beautiful. I want to know more about this strange man and whether or not he is as likable as he seems. ...

Well, your style is good enough and you seem to be a pretty fluent writer. Mostly I don't like that you're turning this great song into such a downer story...but ...