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Choco! This was a sad poem. :'( Poor kitty. But the end cheered me up. The last stanza was a good way to end the poem. :D On to the ...

Hi Yushi! (Can I call you Sushi? XD) I don't want to be too mean, but this isn't actually much like a poem. It looks and sounds more like a ...

Helloo!!! *gasp* You're new!! Welcome!!! Now, for the poem. Lovely. This proves that poems don't have to rhyme to engage their readers. I love the fact that the reader thinks ...

Haha! Such an awesome poem with an awesome topic! Alice in Wonderland is one of my favourites too! Jibber-Jockey, Jabber-Wocky, Wickey-Wattle Tittle-Tattle And a tale shall be told That is ...

This is such a sweet poem! And I feel so shameful for reviewing something that doesn't even sound like it needs to be reviewed. *Hangs head in shame* But, then ...

I. Love. This. Poem. The imagery is wonderful and the concept is amazing! But, just one thing. Even I used to do this before until someone told me: You don't ...

Hellooooo!! I'm HPR and my first critique is this: In the middle of the poem this usually isn't necessary but at least begin your poem with a CAPITAL LETTER. And ...

You have just made me cry using a poem! *Sniff* This was so sad! :( Only, I agree with the person before me. You need to have a rhyme scheme ...

This is the shortest poem I have ever come across. I can't believe it's even possible to write such a short poem. I can't even pick out a favorite stanza ...

Why is the poem called Unknown Intentions? I don't know why, but it just doesn't seem to fit with the poem. And, as we all do, I have a few ...

Ummm... I don't want to be mean but seriously snails ? That's what you're scared of? Or is it just supposed to be funny so that's why you wrote it? ...

This is truly beautiful. The most wonderful poem I ever read. I feel a little ashamed reviewing something about God, but I still have a few nitpicks. The small hands ...

Hello! I'm HPR and I shall review your poem. Firslty, (I'm really sorry about this.) I didn't realise it was about a vampire until I read the review of the ...

Awww!! This is sweet!! I love it. Only one thing to tell you:- Run away with me to Neverland , Where everything shines, the sky, the sand . Where pixies, ...

Helllooo! Im HarryPotterRocks and Ill be reviewing your poem. Firstly, in the first line you need to write July with capital J (kind of like I did just now) Then ...