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Wow, well done. This was a truthful account of what a fair few kids go through in terms of abuse. With the exception of maybe a couple of things of ...

This was a beautiful poem. It flowed really well and touched my heart greatly. I love how you had true inspiration to base your poem on. Real experiences are always ...

Hi, I like how you've attempted to write in stream of consciousness style. It is a tricky way to write and takes a lot of practice before you get the ...

Hey, nice rhythm, flows pretty well. However, I feel it's a little bit to plain to be considered a really good poem. But then again, sometimes the simple descriptions are ...

Hi man, decent piece. I enjoyed reading it. But I had a few problems with some stuff, like the grammar and punctuation, and some lines that to me didn't make ...

I quite enjoyed getting an insight on a cat' life. Bet line: "The Quiet One began stirring in her sleep. If she didn't achieve a sufficient amount of rest, the ...

Oh. My. God. Reading this made me want to cry. I love the beauty it expresses. It was so original and well thought out. I also must commend you on ...

I didn't get how it was a horror. There were no chilling parts of the story. I just felt like the 'whoever it was' was just giving a massive monologue ...

Ahhhh Greek mythology, such romantic stuff. I love it. Perhaps my love of the stuff is making me biased, but i just loved this poem. It was cutting, it was ...

Hi Sammygrifff, I'd love to be able to say how good this poem was, but unfortunately I think it's just average. But in order for you to turn your future ...

Magnificent. Simply magnificent. It's just astounding how well you've captured the pain and struggle of suffocation that lasts only a few moments, into a few paragraphs. You just dug right ...

You nicely captured what it'd be like to be an alcoholic. Well I feel you did anyway. You used good descriptive language and kept the reader engaged. Spot on. However, ...

Wow, very full on story. But that doesn't mean it is no good. I quite enjoyed reading it, and found myself gasping in shock and horror at various different points ...

Hey newbie! (Kidding, I'm newbie too) Seeing as this is your first poem, I commend you for giving it your all. However, there are a number of improvements you could ...

I love your poem, you have a very mature writing style :) However, there was no punctuation at all. You could of at least put a comma after each line, ...