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Hi, I'll get straight to the point. I disagree with the comments below that state "mad" and "sad" are not effective words to describe feelings. You don't have to use ...

I loved this. I am a big fan of satire, and you nailed it. While it was quite funny, you still had something intelligent to say and some really good ...

Wow, you are a real expert in writing. I could see this becoming a classic poem or something; you are a true poet, perhaps not far from exceeding the prowess ...

This poem is either about a mountain-climber whose companion died or something a little more ambiguous. I dunno. Anyway, a poem is good if it triggers some deep thinking-and that's ...

Hi, I like you're descriptive techniques; very sophisticated and overall 'well done'. However, I kind of feel mislead; I guess I thought from the title that the piece would be ...

This was honestly very clever. I really appreciate you're poetic analysis of satire, and how you address it as an art that has been taken advantage of. The rhyming is ...

What a lovely depiction of the love felt for another. It was very sweet. I must say, although you were pretty good in terms of keeping a bit of rhythm ...

Hey, nice job writing the poem, I'd like to say it was brilliant, but unfortunately it was only pretty good for me. But don't let that get you down, because ...

Hahahah so true, alarm clocks are so annoying. This poem was amusing, and pretty well written. I only have a few judgments to make, but nothing serious really :). Firstly, ...

FIRE!? This was a fun little poem, and I loved how you communicated with the audience through the poem, it made it a lot more engaging! Ok, below me, it ...

Hi, to be honest, a part from the general humanity part, I actually don't really get what you are trying to express here. Could you maybe fill me in on ...

Hmmmmmm, very poetic. But I guess that is the idea. I like the description in this piece, it flowed quite nicely most of the time, however, there were grammatical and ...

Hi Luna, I'm not offended! So it's A-Ok with me. Anyway this story was dreary and horrible....but in the best way! The whole time I felt so bad for the ...

Wooooooahoooaaah. That was spine-tingling. Nothing more eerie than reading about the slow withdrawal of a gun that is about to take someone's life! Jeeze! Just some criticisms though; instead "horribl

Hey, I really liked this piece. I'll admit, I was a bit nervous for you when you said it was all dialogue, but you pulled it off :). I really ...