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Re: rtyuio
o_o Did not see that coming, at all. That ending was creepy and cliffhangy, you need to continue this or I will die. Alright, anyways back to the review. Once ...
Apr 13, 2014 -
Re: ,,,
Hai, Laure here for a review, I've always wanted to write something like this for a long time, where our knowledge and memories will be passed down by stories. So ...
Apr 13, 2014 -
Re: Dirt, Forgiveness and Pain
Hai Wey, Laure here once again to review this wonderful poem of yours. Seriously, all your poems are so great and relatable how am I suppose to critic them. I ...
Apr 12, 2014 -
Re: You.
Hey Weymouth, Laure here for a review! Wow, this is a really powerful and emotional poem, it had quite the impact. I don't know if I can actually nitpick this ...
Apr 12, 2014 -
Re: the art of swallowing worlds
Hello, Isha! Laure here as requested! Wow, this is a really unique poem about nature, I just love nature so much and I love the way you've described the earth ...
Apr 11, 2014 -
Re: Spiral
Hello, Laure here for a short review. This is so cool! I'm sorry, I just realized the words on your right says, 'silent spiral towards insanity' which is absolutely a ...
Apr 11, 2014 -
Re: Lonley Soldier
Hello, Laure here for a review. So, I'm going to say right here I'm going to be very blunt and harsh in my review. Prepare yourself. The first thing I ...
Apr 11, 2014 -
Re: Aelita
Hello, Laure here as dared. Now since you dared me, I will rip this story apart mercilessly. But before I do that, let me give you some sugar. I liked ...
Apr 10, 2014 -
Re: *Deleted*
Hello, Laure here for a review! Now you're special, you get to be my 75th review! So first of all, I would like to point out despite the depressing nature ...
Apr 9, 2014 -
Re: imaginary freind
Hai! Laure for a review! I always love poems to do about imaginary friends, even thou I have never had one I ink they are the best part of childhood, ...
Apr 6, 2014 -
Re: Black Abyss
Hello, Laure here for a review! Hm, so after finishing this poem I still wasn't sure exactly what you are trying to express here. At first you seem to be ...
Apr 5, 2014 -
Re: Acceptance: A Way towards Happiness
Hai, Laure here for a very short review on this beautiful piece. Due to the nature of this essay, and because it is a positive essay about a very truthful ...
Apr 1, 2014 -
Re: An Everyday Princess
Hey Traunt! Laure here for a quick review! After that wonderful review you wrote for me on my chapter, I'm afraid this will be a pretty bad review in comparison ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Woman Made of Glass
Heyo Pondab! Laure here back for another quick review! This review will just mainly be me rambling about my love for your 'fairy-tale based' poems because they are so rare ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Haste (the real one)
Yello, Laure here for a review on review day! That is an awesome avvie you have there by the way! Anyways, let's cease all this useless rambling and get on ...
Mar 30, 2014
