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Re: Who's a nut?
Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer for today. Case point forced comedy is never funny, but I shall explain on this further. I warn you my reviews ...
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: [removed by author]
I understand you feel like a great big injustice has happened, but compared to likes of Publishers and Major Editors we're only amateurs. This means we're less harsh than you ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: Your Dream
Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer for today. This critique will be harsh I'm afraid but it's over there as a way to improve you, not attack ...
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: Joy
Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer for today, my first thoughts as I read this was this tries too hard. But I shall explain that in the ...
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: (unnamed)
Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer. This piece makes me unsure. But I shall explain further about that during the review. Let's just say my opinion will ...
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: This Sky Will Betray You
Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer, this piece comes across as something that went on to long. But I shall explain further as I get to review ...
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: What Thou Art Sees in Me
Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer for today, we shall discuss this poem in full and decide whether it's good or not. I shall warn you now ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: The Passing Time
Hello I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer for today. I shall point out I've not much problem with this poem overall. But still feel like I should point ...
Jan 12, 2011 -
Re: Love & Lust
Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer for today, this poem confused me, not in meaning but how it left me feeling. But perhaps I'd do better to ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Engulfed By My Flames
Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer for today. I shall begin by saying I liked idea here, using fire as the major theme in a break up, ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Save Her
Hello I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer for today. I've noticed a depressing pattern in your poetry, it comes across as simplistic and dare I say it generic. ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Tears of a Broken Soul
Hello I'm LastPaladin I shall be your reviewer for today. At first glance, I have to wonder how long ago this piece was written as it appears that you could ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: Finally
Hello ehte, I shall be your reviewer, I want to know something first did you write this when you were younger. There a reason for this and essentially it this. ...
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: to teens
Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer for today, my first thoughts on this is it seems more like lyrics than a poem and by lyrics, I mean ...
Dec 20, 2010 -
Re: 5 Reasons Transvestites Are Better Than Everyone
Error was right on another account, too. It would be very immature to write a counter article in response to this. Also, hypothetically, if this in itself WAS a counter ...
Dec 20, 2010
