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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Who's a nut?

    Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer for today. Case point forced comedy is never funny, but I shall explain on this further. I warn you my reviews ...

    Jan 26, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: [removed by author]

    I understand you feel like a great big injustice has happened, but compared to likes of Publishers and Major Editors we're only amateurs. This means we're less harsh than you ...

    Jan 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Your Dream

    Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer for today. This critique will be harsh I'm afraid but it's over there as a way to improve you, not attack ...

    Jan 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Joy

    Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer for today, my first thoughts as I read this was this tries too hard. But I shall explain that in the ...

    Jan 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: (unnamed)

    Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer. This piece makes me unsure. But I shall explain further about that during the review. Let's just say my opinion will ...

    Jan 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: This Sky Will Betray You

    Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer, this piece comes across as something that went on to long. But I shall explain further as I get to review ...

    Jan 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: What Thou Art Sees in Me

    Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer for today, we shall discuss this poem in full and decide whether it's good or not. I shall warn you now ...

    Jan 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Passing Time

    Hello I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer for today. I shall point out I've not much problem with this poem overall. But still feel like I should point ...

    Jan 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Love & Lust

    Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer for today, this poem confused me, not in meaning but how it left me feeling. But perhaps I'd do better to ...

    Jan 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Engulfed By My Flames

    Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer for today. I shall begin by saying I liked idea here, using fire as the major theme in a break up, ...

    Jan 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Save Her

    Hello I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer for today. I've noticed a depressing pattern in your poetry, it comes across as simplistic and dare I say it generic. ...

    Jan 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Tears of a Broken Soul

    Hello I'm LastPaladin I shall be your reviewer for today. At first glance, I have to wonder how long ago this piece was written as it appears that you could ...

    Jan 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Finally

    Hello ehte, I shall be your reviewer, I want to know something first did you write this when you were younger. There a reason for this and essentially it this. ...

    Jan 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: to teens

    Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer for today, my first thoughts on this is it seems more like lyrics than a poem and by lyrics, I mean ...

    Dec 20, 2010
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: 5 Reasons Transvestites Are Better Than Everyone

    Error was right on another account, too. It would be very immature to write a counter article in response to this. Also, hypothetically, if this in itself WAS a counter ...

    Dec 20, 2010


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