Lashea

I felt like I was there reaching for the light my self, and when I got to the end only to find that the light has escaped from my grasp, ...

I just read it backwards, it does some nice. I love it either way.

I like this a lot I can say of all your pieces this one most relates to me :D

Your writing is still amazing though I love all of it because I get these emotions all the time too.

Nice, I like it. I am a fan f yur wrks and I havet been lately t review them s here I am now. Keep up the good work.

No I never ever read any of your work....

I absolutely love this and If you don't mid Id like to add this to my favorites.... Don't worry Ill put it under your name :-D but I really like ...

yes you may :-D

I like it but you used the wrong there ( They're). Also you title dosen't match your poem theme too me..

Thanx :)

I liked this I thought it was really good and how you describe how we may know a person from different perspectives.... I like how you describe this and how ...

I like the form and how you did this was great and I like it tells more of a little story in some way and it shows how we as ...

This poem really confused me in some spots and I could not keep the vision of what is going on in the poem the whole time in this... I know ...

Great poem :-) I like how I could see this girl and how you did the rhyming at the end but its kinda forced in some places... Other than that ...

I liked this Im working on a poem with the same title... when I post it you should check it out... great poem by the way