Published April 7, 2012
Have you ever felt like you were a burden
As If the whole world was plotting against you
Like you were the master of disaster
And all the miss happenings were your fault
Have you ever wanted to be someone else
Maybe walk in their shoes for a day or so
To see what its like to be somebody else
And to start off with somebody new
Have you ever thought about running away
As if to escape all the pain that fills your heart
Leaving your destructive past behind
And making life better for yourself
Have you ever pictured the world if you were dead
And thought about making everything better
Lifting their heavy burden that you placed upon them
And making life a whole lot simpler
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I love this. <3
Can I put it in my favorites notebook under your username? (':
So prettiful. <33
yes you may
Love the poem! and yes, I have felt a lot like that before -_-