Queen of Nowhere

by 343GuiltySpark

  • Poetry
  • Romantic

Published February 29, 2012

She lacked all the feminine qualities. 
Yeah, she wasn't like all those softies. 
I never saw her dressed in a short skirt 
And she never wore make up, never wiped the dirt 
On her fair fetching face. 
 
Oh, how beautiful she was! 
Natural, simple and without any flaws. 
But am I the only one who saw her beauty? 
How did the fake ones always outshine our cutie? 
But she never seemed to care about it. 
 
He was never interested in her, 
But I know she had feelings for that cur. 
Only if he left that whore 
And removed the blindfold, he'd adore 
The true beauty.

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Lashea commented Comment · Mar 2, 2012

Great poem :-) I like how I could see this girl and how you did the rhyming at the end but its kinda forced in some places... Other than that though you should keep up the good work you are really good and you are a true writer



have u ever noticed how ugly rosy-lipped batfish r? and not like in the “aw ur so ugly ur cute” way that like opossums r — no they’re just hideously ugly beasts that should never have existed and r the epitome of evolution fails. the stupidity, blank look, head emptiness. they’re horrible n everyone who likes them r horrible too. they truly have the worst fan-base >:[
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