Published March 17, 2012
Alone in dark and bitter cold
With deep emotion closing in
Thought's of him reappearing
I want to run away
and open up my mind
He's stuck in my head again
There is no escape
'cause I'm my own worst enemy
No more running
No more lies 'nor tears
No more coming back for him
Although my heart burns
I've got to keep trying
And I will keep on fighting
Until my dying day
You will never take me alive
I'm alive, I'm alive, I'm alive
Never again
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Wow, this is really good. I've read a lot of poetry lately and though I'm not an experienced poet (or a poet at all...) this is cryptic yet understandable to the degree that readers can relate to and and yet still wonder about the meaning.
How did you do it? I also really like your avvie, ha ha, its so cute.
I don't have any criticisms so really good job. Its really touching. I especially like the second last line when you repeat "I'm alive" several times; it really emphasizes the meaning and brings it out so much more than if you just said it once somewhere. So, good job!
Side note, I love the font too
Thanx
this is really good.