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Re: Play it Loud
I love this, not because it's about how you need something to drown out your broken hearts or untold feelings, or even that heartache that you feel for someone but ...
Dec 13, 2017 -
Re: Dust Demons and Stars
I am very glad that you are ok, I know that you may not think that, but in a little piece of your mind, it's telling you that you're gonna ...
Dec 12, 2017 -
Re: Scream and Cry and Calm
OMG!!!!!!!!!! IT'S OK!!!!!!!! I AM HERE FOR YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!! Don't forget that bud. I know Grim may not help you at times, or maybe even at all, but I can help ...
Dec 12, 2017 -
Re: The Freak Freaks Out
If you're talking about what we talked about a few days ago, I' still here, so is Pollution but I don't think she'll help. She's such a Debbie-downer, even more ...
Dec 12, 2017 -
Re: For A Girl
Sup guys, Lake here, and omg, I just I don't know. This is just so awesome! I never realized how spiritual something could be! You guys made no grammar mistakes, ...
Dec 11, 2017 -
Re: Am I Too... Me?
Ok, Fluma, while there may be a couple grammar errors, it was still a wonderful poem, like you were explaining how you know that you're unique, but inside you tell ...
Dec 11, 2017 -
Re: Grim - Part 7 of SMSU Poetry
You sure know how to write a fantastic poem Fluma! And I congratulate you on getting this on Spotlight! I may have never told you about my alter ego, but ...
Dec 11, 2017 -
Re: I Still Believe
This is a really beautiful piece, I love how you explain in great detail how we should keep believing, and by the sound of it it seems like you're on ...
Dec 8, 2017 -
Re: I've Got This, Maybe
Fluma, if this is a poem call for help, I will be the first one you shall go to when you're in distress. No, I may not have known you ...
Dec 8, 2017 -
Re: Deleted
Katya, this was just as amazing as the other, I don't know how you do it. It's so heartfelt and amazingly real. It's so deep because I feel like you ...
Dec 7, 2017 -
Re: Who I Am.
This was soooo spiritual to me. It's basically how I feel, I need to read this every day so that way I can remind myself that in order to change ...
Dec 7, 2017 -
Re: zombie (dg's diary)
This is really awesome, it's definitely lyrical. So first off, I think that this describes what a person feels when they don't think that anything is ok. As if they ...
Dec 7, 2017 -
Re: [redacted]
I really like this, I think it's creative, enticing, and interesting! I love how you had blacked out certain words you intended to not let the reader know, I thought ...
Dec 6, 2017 -
Re: Boss Monster catches small-town fever at the holiday parade
this is such a cute little story because I find that when I read the title, I thought at first that it was about a monster and a boss of ...
Dec 6, 2017 -
Re: Nothing: Roadkill (3)
That was amazing! I love how you used different images in your mind to create different images that seemed quite literal in our minds. In other words, good job using ...
Dec 6, 2017
