Laelle

The poem was very beautiful! I loved the rhyming, and flow. But the plot seemed a little weird. Although you meant this to be something lovely, it felt odd to ...

I really liked how you went from different sides of the text box, it kinda gives character. The poem was FANTASTIC! And for your information, the bees and ees! I ...

I laughed so hard over this one my sister told me to shut up. This one was too funny to handle! :D You did a really good job Salty. I ...

Okay, now the third part makes sense. Good start, and sorta the same for the ending. I think it would have been better if you didn't skip so far ahead. ...

Wow, the ending...was a bit confusing. Anyways, the first part was okay. You need more description. I noticed you never described your dad, or yourself for that matter. This was ...

Here for Team Wizard! This poem is so very sad! There wasn't I mistake I could tell from, well I think so. I liked how you kept on repeating the ...

This was lovely. Red has always been my favorite color! So when I read about red, I fell in love. You engulfed the words with excitement, and it made the ...

I love bubbles! This poem is so cute, and it even matches your avatar. ;) I was thinking about taking a long bath after reading this. It'd be the best ...

This was good, but I think you need some pointers. First we'll start by reviewing the sentences. "Forced apart just after spring" The thing is, who was forced apart? It ...

This was so sweet! Maybe it was just me, but it felt like a guy was saying this. Really weird huh? Back on subject. *straightens posture* This was a very ...

This was beautiful! The most uplifting poem I've heard today, actually read. It was very vibrant with your feelings flowing through very easily. The stuttering made it seem more real ...

Wow, so very depressing. I think that's the most depressing poem I've ever read on here. I give you that. Man, talking about depressing... Anyways! Review time! I noticed there ...

That was actually really cute. I play guitar so this had my eyes glued to the screen for awhile. :D The rhyming could've been a little neater, but it did ...

Okay, I'm assuming this poem is referring to cutters. Maybe...? I love how you described the silence. Because personally, I can't stand it! I'm one of those "let's talk" people, ...

Wow, that was short...Probably the shortest I've read today. Anyways, on with the review. It's subject was something small, but you expanded the meaning into something greater. You had feeling ...