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LadySpark

the way you move your feet when you're trying to go nowhere is a very telling thing

  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Power of Love and Family

    hi RomRom! *curtsies* Lauren ran, She didn%u2019t know where she would go and she had no money no space , but %u201DWell I do not believe I am physically harmed. ...

    May 20, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: The Nursery

    Hi Sammy!!!! I'm gonna give you a really harsh review :) You know I love you! I walk through the dark place, looking for a place to lay my babies. ...

    May 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Alzheimer's Past

    hi! I'm Pointe and I'll be reviewing you today! Some might say it is a long goodbye , Filled with sadness . And depressed sighs . All your hope is ...

    May 19, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Don't Greet Me

    okay, I can't even review it this was so good. And sweet. And good. And wonderfully written. I'll come back after I get over how good it is, and give ...

    May 12, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Finding Perfection.

    Hi! Here to review this awesometastic first chapter! Its gonna be aweosme, so lets get started! Pre-paring for the wedding, preparing such a shook to her, shock for-what for what ...

    May 7, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Heartbreaker 1

    hi! here to review your awesometastic novel chapter! So lets get started! who di d n ' t have a boyfriend That was Max , he did the same routine ...

    May 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Girl With Flowers In Her Hair

    Hi! here to review! Are you scared, little girl? This question disrupted the flow of the poem. Will you run, little girl, or will you out wait the night? And ...

    May 6, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: My Love is Deadly

    Hi Love! Here to review! I was stop pped as his lips His those eyes they were so like Tristen 's . Robert clip , Clip So, I think this ...

    May 6, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Wedding Day

    hi lovey! Here to review! Smiling and greeting the people, then I saw your face, no comma wearing a black tuxedo They all sat in there seats, Their not there ...

    May 6, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: What Girls Want~part one

    Hi Lovey! here to give a review! Only a few people where still taking their formative, were not where witch she did, unnoticed and stole our pants which not witch ...

    May 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Messages

    Hi I'm pointe, and i am here to tear apart your poem sing praises of your poem MessagesIn the air , In our hair , And Everywhere . Lingering from ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Deleted 11

    One problem with this who poem: big words. They confuzzle me. And you have a big word in every sentance. I like the idea, I like the content. just, sometimes ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Happy Birthday, Teenager

    hi! okay, here to tear apart your poem sing prasies of your poem. Happy Birthday, my child! You’re now officially a teen. And according to the public, you’re impulsive and ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Just a Traitor

    hi! Welcome to the site by the way. Seeing as how your new I am going to totally tear this poem apart sing praises of this poem ;) Nitpicks We ...

    May 2, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: First Date

    okay. I love how it was from the best friends point of view. thats a vantage point you don't always get. Its very cute, and made me want to know ...

    May 2, 2011


If I loved you less, I might be able to talk about it more.
— Jane Austen