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LadySpark

the way you move your feet when you're trying to go nowhere is a very telling thing

  • Other » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Dreaming of You- 3. Brothers

    Hi! Here to review the last installment of this wonderful story. (Why does it have to be the last? Can't you write it? For me? Pleasse?) From fifty feet away, ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Other » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Dreaming of You- 2. The Pink Cloak

    Hi love! I've been meaning to review this since you posted, but alas life has gotten in the way and until now, I've been unable too. Anyway. then progressed to ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Deleted 37

    Hiii there! Guess what. *whispers* I'm reviewing for the first time in aggeessssssss Okay so. You are one of my favorite poets on YWS, for sure. I always read your ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Other » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Dreaming of You- 1. Aunt Iseult

    Hi Stella m'dear! This excites me very much! Other little girls from neighbouring aristocratic families, the servants’ children and daughters of merchants in the village would all wear pink, pluck ...

    Oct 5, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: My Body is Not Poetry

    I'm going to be honest here when I say I'm a bit in awe of this poem. I'm going to attempt to review it, but it may turn into me ...

    Aug 17, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: evergreen

    Hi darling! Here to review you :) there is some cold condensation on the windows. morning dew, i suppose, brought in by clouds creeping up on houses as they slept ...

    Aug 17, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: half moon bruises

    'Lo Persy m'dear. Here to review. Now, I'm a huge fan of your work. I've always watched from the sidelines though, and I don't think I've actually ever reviewed one ...

    Aug 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Adam

    Hi love! I'm back to review you (again) heeeheee. I'm winning this reviewing war, currently, so yay! I actually feel like this one was the least developed of all of ...

    Aug 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Sad Spring

    Hey girly! I'm reviewing you again, and if you want to know why, it's because I'm in the midst of a reviewing war, and I really like you're writing style! ...

    Aug 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Summer Rain

    Hi there Lacy! Here to review :) Summer rain pours down, So fast. Instantly, you start us off with a very telly first two lines. I don't even have an ...

    Aug 17, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Nova Axiom: Part 1 - Cruel Sands

    If you haven't guessed yet, I am indeed your secret santa! Happy Christmas in July, again, my dear! For this review, I'm going to take rather different route, giving you ...

    Jul 15, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: Her Name Was Justice.

    Heyo! I don't think we've ever spoken before, so Hi! My name is Sparks! :) Nice to meet you, and happy christmas in July! Let's get to it, shall we?! ...

    Jul 14, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter One)

    Yo, Skinsy! Figured I'd review this since you reviewed all of Days for me :3 Since I didn't really spot any grammatical errors, I'm just going to talk about the ...

    Jul 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: Curosity.

    Hi, Spark here to review! Aw, this is whimsical! I love the adorableness of it, but I also love that it brings a different light on some rather serious topics. ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Rich from all that I see

    Hello there! Spark here to review! Wow, very nice poem here! :) But there are a few errors I think could be sorted out. First of all, your stanzas aren't ...

    May 26, 2013


As if you were on fire from within. The moon lives in the lining of your skin.
— Pablo Neruda