LadySpark

Hey there. I spotted this, and I had to come review, so let's get down to business. Oh darling, put down that book! Stop trying to look smarter than you ...

Hey babe. I'm here to rip you to shreds, like requested ;). Okay so you know how much I like your poetry. I think it's great. And I can see ...

I absolutely loved this poem, let me just say that before I get to critiquing it. It flowed beautifully and I can already see an improvement from you since the ...

hey darling. Here to review this beautiful piece you have given us. First off, you know what a fan I am of your poetry. like omg fan. But there are ...

Okay, hi there! Since this is chapter five, I'm just going to comment on general errors I'm seeing here. :) faeces feces, dear. in the mid-seventies. Maria had never been ...

Don't worry, we've all (or at least, I have) posted controversial pieces. I think where you slipped up was a. posting it without really working on it, so it's very ...

Hey love! I saw your wallpost and figured I'd give it a go :) I personally love your writing style. It's very melodic and fairy like. Fairy like in you ...

Hey Deanie! :) I saw this, and knew I had to review it, because Percy Jackson is one of my favorite things. I've actually never reviewed an essay before, so ...

Hello there, here to review you :3 I actually really like what you've done with this poem. At first I was reading it and thinking about how it needed more ...

Hello! Here to review you. But first off, let me link you to the topic that shows you how to format your poetry using YWS' new system of submission- This ...

Hi :) Spark here to review. First off, your grammar is all over the place . Literally. And I'm not going to fix it for you, because you need to ...

Hey! Spark here to review you :3 Okay so this is very cliche. There's no pretty imagery, no metaphors. You just tell us straight up what's going on, which makes ...

Hi nite! Here to review your poems. I actually don't think I've ever reviewed you, so this'll be something new! We'll start with the first one. I absolutely love the ...

Hey love. I was looking for something to review, and I stumbled upon this lovely gem. Like Audie, I have nothing technicality wise to offer you. It's polished and clean, ...

Hi love. Here to review you :3 Telepathic, psychically in-sync. Hmm.. Even though they mean different things, one can be said without needing to say the other. Otherwise, it gets ...