LadyPurple

Aw I felt sorry for the boy. Why did his daddy call social services? Like Shepard said, I thought he was protective of his child. I love this piece. It's ...

Wow. It took me a second to figure out what this said. Very clever, xjpalladinix. I see no grammar or spelling errors. Good work I hope you write more. ~Ladypurple.

Hiya Fireandice. I like this. I can relate (except for the you know...being dead part.) I don't reallyhave much to say really...But keep writing. ~Ladypurple.

Hiya persephoniea. My grandpa, my dad, my mom and, my grandma use to smoke (my dad tried, but couldn't stop. My grandpa died of lung cancer.) In other words, I ...

Hiya. First off, you wrote this really well. The flow is good and your descritptions are nicee. I like what it stands for. But alas...I have nothing really to say. ...

Thank you to the people who commented. I'm gonna work on descriptions in a while.

Very nicely written Isha. Though it's a bit sad It's still good. Also very truthful. You have no errors (That I can find anyway.) Well that's all for now. ~Ladypurple.

Good poem Snoopysoap. I couldn't find any errors. I liked it. ~Ladypurple.

Ooh! I like love this poem! I agree with Becca. Your personification is good. I hope you can write more sometime. Well that's all from me. ~ladypurple

Hiya Hibiscus. I like this a lot! I'm not very good with poetry so I like to read it from people who can. I love the flow and it doesn't ...

I like the flow. Also I think the emotion is fine. I enjoyed it over all! I really did. ~Ladypurple.

You have great descriptions. My favorite is: And by moonlight I'll gaze at the stars like a child in awe of Magic -- under my violet sky speckled in light ...

Thank you all!!!!!

Hiya. I agree with Lavender about this poem being interesting. I like its originality. I hope you write more. 'Till next time! ~Ladypurple.

Great work, Manpuddin! You're really creative and I loved this piece. I really hope you write more later. Until next time! ~Lady purple.