LadyPurple

First, love the avatar! Anyway, I gotta say, when it comes to spelling and grammar, I see nothing wrong (to me. Someone else might, though). I like this piece. It ...

The realm of darkness was my open tomb, stretching miles from around me. The black blended together, swallowing me whole, killing me softly. A purple glow beamed off the ground, ...

Oh, hi. Just another poem about... I dunno! But...Oh, well. Enjoy it! Is this a nightmare or is it a dream? This is all so bittersweet Because you're like the ...

i wrote this after watching a movie called the Wanderer Check it out! The Midnight wolf The snow falls, Onto the dark, hard ground. It dances through the bare trees, ...

Out of sheer boredom I watched one couple, a pale girl with a widow’s peak and a muscular, slightly sparkly guy. They were staring adoringly into each other’s eyes, oblivious ...

Elinor Brynn always says the good stuff that you want to say... If not her then someone else. Well, I she made some good points. I found no errors in ...

Every time I asked from you a little more, I only wanted us as we were before, when you knew well my heart was yours— before it had those wretched ...

It was late at night. No one was home but me . T he power went out. It had been a few minuets since the power went out the phone ...

R emember when, you held my hand. you whispered in my ear, you said you loved me ? I think you meant to end this as a question. R emember ...

HAHAHAhahahahaha. I like it alot. No faults as far as I can see! Please write more! Oh yes and I love your beggining. Very good. Would write more but got ...

Look at my salted heart beating the sea to rise, so I may submerge. Please touch my seaweed skin braiding this ocean raw, so I may float down. Hear my ...

I'm not much of the poetry writer, but I was really proud of this one. It's called a Rondel for those of you who want to know. I hope you ...

In the end, there was a silence. One by one I watched the petals fall, soft and white against the flames. Chaos all around me, but somehow there was nothing ...

Hiya maryletsflyaway. I gotta say: I liked it. The imagery is good and I love the flow. It didn't feel forced at all. I would try and look for some ...

Corrections in red. A poem I wrote after my family's dog of 15 years died. Why do people sigh as they pass you by? You only just wonder why. Why ...