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Re: Your Saying You're In Love
First, the title should be, "You're saying you're in love". G irl , he ' s gonna break your heart. Girl, you haven't figured him out yet. W hy do ...
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: Fluffy the Vampire Slayer Part 3
Heya, Bubble. As always, you amuse me with this story :). Anyway, I found two maybe typos. “I know how it feels , ” She said. “I used to be ...
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: Wicked Innocence (NaNo 2010) Chapter 1
1 God, I always hated my life. It was always living in a fake reality smiling happily with my controlling mother and absent father. I sat in my tower bedroom, ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Walking into Grammy's house uninvited...
So I'm working on a funny retelling of Red Riding-hood for a contest but it's for school and this twist was just totally not school appropriate 8) I hope you ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Again. . . .
Here I lie again in this dark night the shadow is my only friend heart broker Huh? Heart broker? here I lie again alone in this night the shadows move ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: Hate You for Loving You
Hiya. I found some parts to be repetitive. I found it slightly boring. The emotion is not right.. let's just say that. I'm never good at reviewing poems. But I ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: It's not real... editing currently unfinished
IT'S NOT REAL.... CHAPTER ONE MODERN DRACULA I have started to create a telepathic like close relationship with the evening bats that frequent the night sky, I have been pondering ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: abuse part 2
read my poem abuse first if you want the full thing I come back to the dirty little shack I left her in she is still there. Lying very still ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: Sex In Books (Opinion)
I think it depends. If it's... let's say... some book about teenage pregnancy then I find nothing wrong with it in those. I have a sex scene in my own ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: he can not hear
Smirks the fireball launched from evil, walking sloppy, approached her. People flee from the horrible cruelty that pierces the air, a cry is widespread, but the man does not perceive ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: Ephemeral lives
Our cage door was then opened wide, We thought that we were free, Our legs could stretch, run, skip, and gambol, But the truth we could not see. That is ...
Nov 11, 2010 -
Re: Once a long time ago.
Wow... That's all I can really say... That was sad... but it was very truthful. Very sweet and relatable. I rmember some of my childhood and sometimes I miss it. ...
Nov 11, 2010 -
Re: Kissing under twilight
Your blue eyes sail on my rocky lips. Watching me as I speak. Dagger words slice my tongue as they leap from my throat, To your ears. I see your ...
Nov 11, 2010 -
Re: Standing alone
People surround me, I am never alone, Not for a second, Yet why is my heart so lonely ? This is supposed to be a question, right? For it longs ...
Nov 11, 2010 -
Re: Automatically in Love: Bill Kaulitz fantasy Ch.5
Britt's Perspective "I HATE HER SO MUCH! WHY IS SHE HANGING OUT WITH BILL WHEN IT SHOULD BE ME BY HIS SIDE?! I'M HIS GIRLFRIEND! SHE'S BRAINWASHED HIM TO THINK ...
Nov 11, 2010
