LadyPurple

Hiya Kitty! I love the flow. The message is good. originality you've got none, poetry like this is dead and the only people who read it are teachers and other ...

Like I'm gonna puke my meal, meal, meal, meal, I really don't want to, to, to, to, But I lean over and do, do, do, do, That part was hilarious. ...

Hey there Solv! Congratulations on the third chapter! I liked it pretty well. But I found these nit-picks. Hi, here this is the 2nd draft of this chapter. :D If ...

Hey Josh. Welcome to YWS (again). Well I really don't like to read things on here when they're that long but I did. It has potential! The above comments pointed ...

I like this a lot. It's so passionate. Also, very pretty. I hope you write more! That was all that mattered, as long as we believed in each other . ...

Hiya Beccalicious. Looks like I'll be your critique person tonight. I found a little nit pick. People call me foolish or delusional for describing what isn’t there When all you ...

Hiya Panda326. Ladypurple at your service! OK I found a few spelling and grammar-ish errors. Things in paretheses are the errors. Colors aren't working for me now. Ending at a ...

Hiya, Aouther2b. I read this and was like..."ooh that's sad." That's never happened to me before but still I've heard about this happening to some people in my school. But ...

Hiya desiredanime25. I liked this. I just found two spots in need of tweaking. And I remember how you smelt Smelt just sounds a little...weird. Tried smelled. And oh, how ...

I like your poem mostly because it's really true. Girls go through a lot. I like the flow but it kind of sounded cliche in the begginging. But sometimes it ...

Hiya Wish. I read this and said "Aww." This is really cute and I like it. The thing about review Sunday is when you go to review, it turns out ...

I was traveling through a happy land, listening to my favorite band. But I looked down and saw the sand, looking all dark and tanned. There was an arch and ...

Well it was good for a poem that you wrote back when you were twelve. Mine would've sucked back then. I like it a lot. Even if it might seem ...

I found just a few nit-picks. It's not too bad. I think it's good for a short little poem. where do I go from here? because let's be serious, I've ...

Hiya Hailyanniful. I agree with Samiam. This poem means a lot. Good job! Well, I found one problem. no on e can stop her. You left the "e" out. But ...