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Hi Hibiscus. I think this poem is cute. I was chasing a fading light as it gushed away in a n showering sunset Creativefreak pointed out some good parts. So ...

The canvas is blank, "Is" sounds better in that sentence. But the real story, It's not so easy, For motivation Can be quite sleazy. That doesn't flow too well for ...

Hey AspiringAuthor. I like the imagery. I also think it's nice that you're writing it because a friends' dad died. For you there is Eternal cold silence, And twilight drooping ...

I had bumped into her, apologized, and upon realizing who she was, launched into a volley of questions. “Yes comma Makensi.” “So you're going to be an avatar driver?” “Yes ...

Hey there xjpalladinix I know how you felt. My grandpa died last year a few weeks after my birthday. This was really sad and when I wrote a poem about ...

Hey there Howler. I'll be your reviewer today! First off, I enjoyed this piece and the flow went well to me. I found one thing. They wish and want and ...

Hiya Trace_Chera. I read your poem "Sabrina" and this and liked them both. I couldn't find spelling errors or grammar errors. oh so blue "Oh so blue" sounds cliche. (The ...

Hey Tigs. I just found a few errors that need to be fixed. The knife it stares at me Hoping to enter her throat The pain and suffering She may ...

I feel like this is the first novel I've attempted to write that has publishing in it's future. For this reason, please be as hard as possible. Thank you~Kit The ...

Hi. I was guessing that it was a human baby at first but it got a bit confused.... It may be that I don't know what cellophane is. Anger said ...

Hey Kitrosemon13. No spelling or grammar mistakes are really jumping at me right now. So all I really have to say is your rhyming feels forced and it doesn't flow ...

Hi Amandajo I'll be your reviewer today. I like this piece. None of the stanzas really seemed forced to me. It closing behind me, with barely a mark. Try re-wording ...

Hiya DrowningInDarkness. I like how you started. I'm interested now. I'm guessing you'll explain why the killer killed the girl later on. So I'll just move on. You have no ...

Hi Ariberry. I just wanna point out a few spelling errors in this. I wake up, get ready, eat my food, and just feel blank. My mind goes on a ...

Hey there KAH. First off, when it comes to spelling or grammar errors I found a few. They're in red. Stay away from me I need you too badly I ...