Published August 10, 2010
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Hi. I was guessing that it was a human baby at first but it got a bit confused.... It may be that I don't know what cellophane is. Anger said it tells her that the baby is a bird... I don't particularly like it. Sorry.
~Lady purple.
I like this although I did not completely understand it. The imagery was great and the flow was easy to follow. Your words were very descriptive but It was hard for me to know if it was a human child or a bird, the cellophane part tells me its a bird.
I am not completely sure about this.
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Anger
honestly, i don't get it. i dont know if im being stupid (most likely, i am) or if this poem really doesn't make sence. either way, i don't like it:(