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Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 9.1
Wesh! Professor Jade here for a review. I'm kind of in a rush, so I'm just going to give my overall thoughts. Sorry! The awkward parts made me cringe, the ...
May 27, 2019 -
Re: Home
Wesh! Professor Jade here for a review so let's just go! I'm just going to give my overall thoughts. I liked the drama, deepness, and metaphors. I enjoyed this but ...
May 27, 2019 -
Re: To Fill a Glass to the Rim with Water
Wesh! Professor Jade here for a quick review. Let's just get to it. I love the metaphor. You use the word and a lot and that really makes it choppy. ...
May 27, 2019 -
Re: Branded pt. 3
Wesh! Professor Jade here to review your story. Thank you for the tag and I'm sorry for the delay! Let's just get to it.... I'm just going to give this ...
May 27, 2019 -
Re: Hypocrite
Wesh! Professor Jade here with a review... Let's just do it! She called to tell me her woes. She seemed to think herself worthless, And deserving of all the pain ...
May 27, 2019 -
Re: Here's To You
Wesh! Professor Jade here. Let me just give a quick review on my overall thoughts. Like the pros and cons. OK, let's go!! PROS: This is honest, deep, you say ...
May 27, 2019 -
Re: Love Me, Love Me Not
Wesh! Professor Jade here with a pretty quick review compared to my others. I saw this in the Green Room and the title caught my eye. You gripped me from ...
May 27, 2019 -
Re: Love Conquers
Wesh! Professor Jade here. You have already had a lot of feedback, but let's se what I can do. Girl's POV Every time I think of you, I build my ...
May 27, 2019 -
Re: The Circle
Wesh! Professor Jade here for a review! Let me start by saying I'll be going through this line by line and giving honest comments. Please don't take any of it ...
May 27, 2019 -
Re: Heartbreak; a question of how. Not if.
Wesh! Professor Jade here with a review. Since this is a short poem, I will go through it line by line to help improve your style. Let's just get to ...
May 27, 2019 -
Re: Some Days
Wesh! My name is Jade and I'm here to review your poem. Line by line. Word by word. Anyways, your title caught my attention so here we are. let's go! ...
May 27, 2019 -
Re: Shadows; Part 2 of Entry 5
Wesh! Professor Jade here with a review. I've never read any of this before, so excuse me if some of my comments make no sense with your story plot. OK? ...
May 27, 2019 -
Re: Curious Female
Hello! Professor Jade here with a quick review. Let's just get to it. I'll be going through and just stopping whenever I see something worth pointing out. OK? Let's go. ...
May 27, 2019 -
Re: Retaliating. Chapter Three
Wesh, (that's the French equivalent of yo so it's my new word. And it's French so it's classy and cool) it's Professor Jade here for a review! To be honest, ...
May 18, 2019 -
Re: Chapter 2: Heist
Sorry this took a while. Long story short, I’m on a small phone on vacation so I’m just going to give some overall thoughts.... You keep a good tempo of ...
May 1, 2019