LadyBug

I saw your post and the title looked interesting, so I thought I'd give it a try. This is a "bubbly" please excuse my future puns, I am NOT sorry ...

Professor Jade here, blah, blah, blah, skipping the formalities. I'm so sorry I don't review quicker and I have no good reason, but I read it when it came out, ...

Wesh! Jade here for a quick little review. I feel the flow is a bit off, and I personally think parenthesis in a poem seems wrong. I read it quite ...

Wesh! I'm here to give this a quick review I know this is old and you don't care about it anymore, but just let me talk about it. This has ...

Wesh! It's me! I can't draw very well but I can definitely give pointers on how to make this better. OK, let's start The hands feel oddly connected to the ...

Wesh! Jade here to review your short story. let's start! I think you make the paragraphs too long, which results in a choppy flow and it's hard to read. I ...

This poem reminds me of my siblings, honestly. I think it's relatable, deep, while still lighthearted and nice. The flow is prettty choppy and I feel you ask too many ...

Hi, so I'm just going to give this a quick review! On a dark night, Lightning strikes. The wind howls, The monster growls, The floor creaks, I like the rhyme ...

Wesh! I keep finding your poems everywhere so let's just get to it! I like it, it's near, I think it would be better if you did" it is near," ...

Hey girl! I'm sorry this is late but I was waiting for review day go Team Awesome! and I'm just going to go through and stop whenever I see something ...

So, I feel your writing style has changed since the last chapter. Sorry, that didn't make sense. I think this is pretty good and YOU COMPLETELY GOT MY EMOTIONS I ...

WESH! Ok, so I'm hyped on cake so let's go, I'll just point out when I see things. This is actually pretty smooth. LETZ GO Izzy rolled her eyes, “Yeah, ...

Wow, so, this is pretty good. I'm just trying to get this done quickly so I'll give my overall thoughts :). I think you have definitely gotten better at writing ...

Wesh! So, I'm going to go through this line-by-line. Feel free to disregard any of my suggestions. The stars are burning shadows Nice start, strong and deep. to the sunset ...

Wesh! Seeing as this is so short, I'm going to give just my overall thoughts. Note: This is a Flash Short Story so it'll be super short. I think you ...