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Re: Numb
I want you to know that THIS. IS. RELATABLE. The mind is a scary thing and when you get trapped inside it is the most horrific thing you can ever ...
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Re: sparks
This....Is....Beautiful....The use of two objects that creat fire is so creatively used. It shows how it sets a fire in the heart and the pain and emotion poured into trusting ...
Sep 11, 2019 -
Re: a wind's words
This a very detailed, emotional poem. I love it, you just need to bring it down a level so if you have a younger audience reading they can comprehend it ...
Oct 22, 2018 -
Re: The Three Lockets [Chapter 5.1]
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Sep 12, 2018
I really enjoyed it. Every time I had to put the book down(Theoretically speaking), I looked forward to picking it up again and getting back into the story. I absolutely ... -
Re: The Lost Dragon 5.2
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Sep 12, 2018
I wish I was more of a writer because this book deserves a more eloquent review. I completely recommend it and hope that other readers find the same joy in ... -
Re: Detonator
"The questions rise and fall, from steady annoyance, to outright infuriation. A volcano, I might be. I think a bomb is more accurate. And these people are poking me with ...
Sep 12, 2018 -
Re: Christmas Day
Holy S***, I feel the exact same way, every single Christmas. This poem is very simple but heartfelt. I love it so much. My favorite part of this poem is ...
Sep 7, 2018 -
Re: Tired
This is a very simple but very heart felt poem. The heartbreak is very real and it is very relatable. My favorite part of your poem is "I fear being ...
Sep 7, 2018 -
Re: Truths
Holy crap, Temptress....I'm like speechless right now, this poem may be short but it is so meaningful, so relatable and amazing. "Maybe these words I spill are jsut waves of ...
Sep 6, 2018 -
Re: The End (edited)
This is such a relatable poem! Everyone has been through heartbreak once in there life time maybe even more. My favorite part of your poem is "Just to save us ...
Sep 6, 2018 -
Re: African Sunset
I thought that this way very sentimental, how you said you'd cherish this moment is what I loved the most. It tells you everything you want to know about your ...
Sep 6, 2018 -
Re: Beautiful Woman Return to Me!
Hi, this is Lady Astella with a review. This is very deep, the man in the poem is waiting and longing for love but no one ever comes. This is ...
May 15, 2018 -
Re: Cade (ch 1)
This is an amazing chapter! You keep writing because this is really good. I will keep reading your work. You amazing BOIIIII!!!! OR GURRRRRLLLLL!!!!! Haha sorry. You had great grammer, ...
May 15, 2018 -
Re: Just a memory
Wow, this is really deep, even though it's short it hit me where it hurts. I can relate because I was bullied a lot. Just remember to always think of ...
May 15, 2018 -
Re: Phoenix
I love the emotion in this poem, it's very deep and it hit me in my heart. I actually started crying while reading this. I really love this, I will ...
May 15, 2018
