User avatar

LadyAstella

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Numb

    I want you to know that THIS. IS. RELATABLE. The mind is a scary thing and when you get trapped inside it is the most horrific thing you can ever ...

    Sep 11, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: sparks

    This....Is....Beautiful....The use of two objects that creat fire is so creatively used. It shows how it sets a fire in the heart and the pain and emotion poured into trusting ...

    Sep 11, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: a wind's words

    This a very detailed, emotional poem. I love it, you just need to bring it down a level so if you have a younger audience reading they can comprehend it ...

    Oct 22, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: The Three Lockets [Chapter 5.1]

    Note: This review has been deleted
    I really enjoyed it. Every time I had to put the book down(Theoretically speaking), I looked forward to picking it up again and getting back into the story. I absolutely ...

    Sep 12, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Lost Dragon 5.2

    Note: This review has been deleted
    I wish I was more of a writer because this book deserves a more eloquent review. I completely recommend it and hope that other readers find the same joy in ...

    Sep 12, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Detonator

    "The questions rise and fall, from steady annoyance, to outright infuriation. A volcano, I might be. I think a bomb is more accurate. And these people are poking me with ...

    Sep 12, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Christmas Day

    Holy S***, I feel the exact same way, every single Christmas. This poem is very simple but heartfelt. I love it so much. My favorite part of this poem is ...

    Sep 7, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Tired

    This is a very simple but very heart felt poem. The heartbreak is very real and it is very relatable. My favorite part of your poem is "I fear being ...

    Sep 7, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Truths

    Holy crap, Temptress....I'm like speechless right now, this poem may be short but it is so meaningful, so relatable and amazing. "Maybe these words I spill are jsut waves of ...

    Sep 6, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The End (edited)

    This is such a relatable poem! Everyone has been through heartbreak once in there life time maybe even more. My favorite part of your poem is "Just to save us ...

    Sep 6, 2018
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: African Sunset

    I thought that this way very sentimental, how you said you'd cherish this moment is what I loved the most. It tells you everything you want to know about your ...

    Sep 6, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Beautiful Woman Return to Me!

    Hi, this is Lady Astella with a review. This is very deep, the man in the poem is waiting and longing for love but no one ever comes. This is ...

    May 15, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Cade (ch 1)

    This is an amazing chapter! You keep writing because this is really good. I will keep reading your work. You amazing BOIIIII!!!! OR GURRRRRLLLLL!!!!! Haha sorry. You had great grammer, ...

    May 15, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Just a memory

    Wow, this is really deep, even though it's short it hit me where it hurts. I can relate because I was bullied a lot. Just remember to always think of ...

    May 15, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Phoenix

    I love the emotion in this poem, it's very deep and it hit me in my heart. I actually started crying while reading this. I really love this, I will ...

    May 15, 2018


'They are afraid of nothing,' I grumbled, watching their approach through the window. 'Together, they would brave Satan and all his legions.'
— Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights