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Re: Dead Weight
Really good job on the poem, It kind of sounds like this poem was about love that has ended. It sounds like the person really misses them too, and a ...
Nov 3, 2020 -
Re: Venus Rising from the Sea
Hi, LUNARGIRL here with a review! I loved your poem, I am a huge fan of greek and Roman mythology so I am just going to drive straight into it. ...
Nov 3, 2020 -
Re: Chris Wallace Needs A Vacation
Amazing job! This poem even though it was short had so much power and emotion to it. You described the character Chris Wallace so well. I could picture him in ...
Nov 3, 2020 -
Re: I Love You
Really good job! You use a lot of description, and it was very emotion and powerful. I really liked how you kept repeating some lines like "I Love You." And ...
Nov 3, 2020 -
Re: Halloween with Snoink, Grif, Edward Cullen, and Bulbasaur
Loved it! "WE’RE NOT SHOUTING, WE’RE TALKING IN ALL CAPITAL LETTERS." was my favorite part along with. "OH MY GOSH, I LOVE EDWARD CULLEN HEART HEART LOVE LOVE ALL MY ...
Nov 2, 2020 -
Re: Eureka Fillips (Chapter 1)
This was a great chapter you wrote! You had great description, and I love how all the characters interact with each other. I can't wait to tread the next chapter, ...
Nov 2, 2020 -
Re: A Rose With Thorns (if anyone has a better title idea, please let me know!)
First off, I really enjoyed your short story. I think you could pick a better name for the story, but since I have no ideas for that, you don't have ...
Nov 2, 2020 -
Re: Love Beneath The Blood -1
Good work on the story, but there are a few things I have to say. 1. In the first paragraph I had to read it again to realize who was ...
Nov 2, 2020 -
Re: Guess The Inspiration
Great job on the poem, it is very interesting and different. One thing I have to say is that some of your lines rhymed like. "The just west, Can be ...
Nov 2, 2020 -
Re: If You Need Me
Hello, this is LUNARGIRL with a short review for you. I really liked your poem, it had so much power, emotion, and detail in it. It was a very sad ...
Nov 2, 2020 -
Re: Like a Child
Hello, here's LUNARGIRL with a review for you! First off great job with the poem! I love how you repeated the line "I want to laugh like a child," throughout ...
Nov 2, 2020 -
Re: it hurts to be good.
Hello, this is LUNARGIRL here with a review for you. First off, great job with the poem. I love how throughout the poem you repeat the word please, it adds ...
Nov 1, 2020 -
Re: Poetry
Hello, LUNARGIRL here with a review! Great job on the poem! You chose all the right words and made it sound beautiful. I loved all your similes you used. There ...
Nov 1, 2020 -
Re: to the unhappily ever afters
Hello, this is LUNARGIRL with a review for you! This was a very interesting and long poem. You are missing a lot of punctuation and capitalization in it. I feel ...
Oct 31, 2020 -
Re: Forsaken
Wow, this was an amazing poem! I loved all your stanzas and how they rhymed through out the whole poem. There was so much power and emotion to it. It ...
Oct 31, 2020