Hello, LUNARGIRL here with a review!Great job on the poem! You chose all the right words and made it sound beautiful. I loved all your similes you used. There was so much emotion, and it was such a strong poem. My favorite part was the beginning. "I draw my strength with a broken pencil,for nothing makes me whole like an empty page.I search for hidden meaning between these lines,and find her with hope at the end of each piece."Your poem was so inspirational, and I loved every part of it.Can't wait to read what you write next!Carpe diem, LUNARGIRL
Hello, Abdu's here for a review.I'm not going to rate this piece. It'll put this wonderful piece of writing to shame.I only have one word for it - FANTASTICEach and every word is appropriately chosen and used. I've got nothing to say about it, except that it's very well-written.A question, though.Is there a rule in English poetry that you have to start with a capital letter in every line?Please let me know.In any case, I loved the poem.
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