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Hello, LUNARGIRL here with a review!
Great job on the poem! You chose all the right words and made it sound beautiful. I loved all your similes you used. There was so much emotion, and it was such a strong poem. My favorite part was the beginning.
"I draw my strength with a broken pencil,
for nothing makes me whole like an empty page.
I search for hidden meaning between these lines,
and find her with hope at the end of each piece."
Your poem was so inspirational, and I loved every part of it.
Can't wait to read what you write next!
Carpe diem,
LUNARGIRL
Hello, Abdu's here for a review.
I'm not going to rate this piece. It'll put this wonderful piece of writing to shame.
I only have one word for it - FANTASTIC
Each and every word is appropriately chosen and used. I've got nothing to say about it, except that it's very well-written.
A question, though.
Is there a rule in English poetry that you have to start with a capital letter in every line?
Please let me know.
In any case, I loved the poem.