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KylaThompson

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  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: Deleted

    Hello, Kyla here to review you. I think it is really nice, I like it. I'm going to break into it and tell you my ideas. If I say something ...

    Mar 6, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Boobs

    Hello Kyla here to review you. I have never heard a poem like this before, it is very original. I would like to correct you though. Even though that might ...

    Mar 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Heavy Wedding Band

    Hello Kyla here to give you a review. :) I really think it is entertaining and good! I didn't see many mistakes or confusions, but I would like to point ...

    Mar 1, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Forget-Me-Nots

    Hello Kyla here to give you a review. I really enjoy the poem, it is really nice. I would like to break it down though and tell you what I ...

    Mar 1, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Facade

    Hello, Kyla here to leave you a review. I want to first start off by saying that it is a very lovely poem, and I enjoyed reading it. It does ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Last Poem

    Hello I'm Kyla, and I'm here to leave you my review. :) I think that it was really good! I like how you were strong through it, you kept it ...

    Feb 22, 2013
  • Other » General, General Re: Shaded Yesterday Night

    Hello I'm Kyla, and I'm here to leave you a review. :) I think it was really good! Did you write this yourself? I do see some punctuations, but I ...

    Feb 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: A Glass Vase

    Hello my name is Kyla, I'm here to leave you my review. I really like this, it is very nice. I loved how it ran smoothy; very subtle. I love ...

    Feb 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Summer

    Hello my name is Kyla, and I'm here to leave you a review! I like this, it is sad but it is still a strong piece. I was a little ...

    Feb 22, 2013
  • Lyrics » Supernatural, Lyrical Re: Big Creatures

    Hello, my name is Kyla and I'm new to YWS. Just here leaving you a review. I like it, I think it is nice. I was a little confused though ...

    Feb 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Sailor

    Hello I'm Kyla just leaving you with a review. I really like this, its very smooth and calm. I was a little confused by why you have commas in some ...

    Feb 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Health, Dramatic Re: The Mind of a Sinner

    Wow this is pretty dang good!! Okay So I'm going to review anyways. You think mine is deep!! It does need some punctuation adjustments but I love it. It is ...

    Feb 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: If Ever

    Hello my name is Kyla, and I'm here to leave you a review. :) I really like this poem you have, it is very sweet and heartwarming. I do see ...

    Feb 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: The Cane

    Hello my name is Kyla, and I'm here to leave you a review. :) I haven't heard one like this before, but I really enjoyed reading. I think it needed ...

    Feb 22, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: We Waited

    Hello my name is Kyla, I'm just here to give you your review. I think it is a nice piece, I enjoyed reading it. I saw some punctuations that could ...

    Feb 22, 2013


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